When Rarity gets a request for two dresses from Princess Celestia she can't believe her luck. However she becomes a little too obsessed with creating these dresses... Will she realize that in time?
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This is my first fanfic, and it is a Sparity. To be exact I've adapted scenario from one of my all time favorite animated series, just to let you know I'm not that brilliant. ;)
I'm not English native speaker, so go easy on me. ;) Please let me know if you find any errors.
I'd also like to say, that I'm very grateful to my friend irky3, and if you enjoy the story you should be thankful too. Reason being without her proofreading it would be MUCH worse. ;D Remember though, she's not native speaker either.
Chapters (10)
When Rarity gets a request for two dresses from Princess Celestia she can't believe her luck. However she becomes a little too obsessed with creating these dresses... Will she realize that in time?
3729941 Thanks ^_^
Although I'm kind of ashamed to have errors even in description.
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Oh shit, though it seems a bit rushed for Spike to kick the bucket this soon into the story.
Grammer could use some fixing but all in all its a great story so far.
Is Rarity in a coma?
Awww :) so she can see Spike in her dreams. :)
Thanks for the comments. ;3
3734539 I would really appreciate if you would send me a PM with parts where are errors, but I won't blame you if you won't as it is pain to do so. ;)
So far from what I have read, I think you got this storyline from one of the Futarama episodes. But I'm still interested in this story. Keep up the good work :)
I see what you did there... Nice Futerama reference.
Celestia with a banana?
3739077 I think it is common knowledge, that Celestia loves bananas.
yay
Gotta love Twicunt. She accepts Celestia's words as absolute truth and law. If Celestia told Twilight to raze Ponyville to the ground she'd do it without question.
When will this be finished it's getting good.
3740335 To be honest I have pretty much the whole story ready, I just have to read each chapter one more time to make some corrections.
Also: thanks ^_^
3739644 She really loves bananas *wink wink, nudge nudge*
Rarity needs to go to the one pony who knows about dreams and nightmares: Princess Luna.
Hehe Futurama and Trollestia. I like.
She just can't win!!!
That was a bitch slap, a double eye poke, wall-face grind, secret finger jutsu-a thousand years of death, and a kick to the balls wrapped up in one move.
Poor Rarity
3745954 I agree, this took me by surprise. Never expected that life could be such a douche. This reminds me of Doctor Who. When the Doctor keeps telling Amy to breathe. And then she finally wakes up, so to speak. I think Rarity needs a totem, so she can discern what is a dream, and what isn't.
I think I know what's really going on...
Oh Luna
Well... Bummer...
I think I've seen this plot somewhere before.
3748125 You mean Rarity's amazing plot?
3745954 I have to tell you, you've made me lol, and I mean it. ;]
I knew it was related to Futurama! :D
3751522 You were right, but you weren't the only one.
Guess it is to be expected that bronies are also fans of cartoons. 
Haha yea totally Futurama.
Awesome story :D
Okay, did not see this kind of ending. Though it is a nice change from the usual. Good job dude.
Considering Spike's size change during his greed rampage, him growing wings after what happened is kinda minor in comparison.
Th-th-th-That's all Folks!!!!!!!
I don't watch Futurama but I kinda knew the twist long before.
3751303 Well, who could miss Rarity's Plot. I was more going for the stories plot. It looks like you told everypony in the end though which is good, and a very sweet ending. I do remember that episode as well.
3752008 It is pretty minor in comparison, that's true. ;) But then again, Rarity likes to exaggerate.
3751759 Thanks
3751760 What do you mean by usual? ;p Clop? ;]
3753167 I was thinking about some sort of continuation though.
3753607 Hope you enjoyed it nonetheless. ^_^
3754088 I didn't want to spoil it from the beginning (so I've only wrote that it was from a cartoon). :P I hoped that it won't be so obvious. ;D Thanks for compliment on the ending.
3756385 Naw the fact that you basically pulled out a double or triple fake out. You don't see to many of those here.
The more and more I was seeing "Rarity, please wake up." I thought for sure she was in a coma. But this removed all doubt...
5321329 Yeah, well, I hope you enjoyed it anyway.
Rainbow Dash is drunk
I have a feeling...something bad is about to happen...
Spike, I swear to god! You better wake up!