Going Through Rework
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midashguy
Your average fan fiction writer. I enjoy anime, music, my little pony of course.
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A bit fast the Start, dont you think? Twilight would be more excited about a new Species to Learn from. Cliche, I know. But, that's how we know and Love her
I will watch the Story, because, its a nice Idea you have here. I wonder how will Fluttershy react, when she found out, what Philomena was.
YOU LIE TO ME!?!
Wait... isn't Philomina female?
2675415 Yea, I plan to have an explanation to that later. magic and stuff.
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Before you say anything I have to say, that poor bastard...
Hmm very original, and it seems quite good.
Don't know if i should favorite yet.
2675542 lol
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What do yo expect? He's a guy that not just shape changes but gender changes as well
2676171 Tis the power of the blue phoenix feather
oh hot damn i like this alot
2676970 Thanks, I'm trying my hardest to make this the best it can be.
2676980 Will i must say you are doing pretty good.
2677366 I'm really glad to hear so many people like the story.
2676980 Eh big booeh or girl dont know and or care (no offense) take yo time wit dis cuz its nice
Good chapter
Not much else to say i 'pose. 
2851838 Eeyup.
In Fluttershy's outburst I saw a few gramar fails.
But the Story is good so far.
2876389 Whoops, not sure how I screwed that up,
2876404 I'ts never to late to correct a mistake^^
2876418 True, very true
Somehow it feels like an unknown 'hero' is hiding? But who? Trixie? Zecora? LULU? The answers and more coming up after theeeeeeeeeeeeese messages.
Are you tired of constant backpain? Well, you need to try...
"You might want to becauseful who you accuse of what they haven't done." Will said with a smirk.
i think you meant be careful
Umm becauseful isn't a word
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*sigh* I need an editor really badly
2878517 well if you want i could try a hand editing... i may not be the best but its better then nothing
Gosh i hate cults, they deserve only one thing...
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lolwut, they ain't got nothing on Will
3083048 I'm beginning to wonder if I made him way to OP or not
3083223 nah, when you live as long as he, you learn some stuff
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so will was the only human ever to set foot in equastria ever so ponies at first wrote him off as a monster or something dangerous like that...? the past was dangerous and ponies paranoid, distrustful and closed minded to a lot of things that arnt normal to them o did he ever met discord?
3083441Thats what I'm implying, and yes.
3083441 Also, Will isn't the only human, there we're many before him, and many still to come
why does Spectral Hoof thinks that humans are so dangerous. Why does Will have a Blue Phoenix feather. Who were these past humans.
Find out next time on Dragon Ball Z... Wait... Find out next time on Celestia's Oldest Friend!!!!!!!!
3084136 Hahahaha!
brilliant
3084159 But no seriously i expect all of those questions to be answered
3084393 one way or another, they will be answered.
This sounds like the pony version of the Kou Klux Klan. Only instead of hating blacks, They hate humans,
“I don’t wanna kill you, what would I do without you? Go back to rippin’ off hay dealers… no, no, no… no you, you complete me.” - What I imagine will would say when and if he ever meets the new leader of the TOSH. ((Also nice acronym there. I now expect the leader to be discord, due to Tosh himself being close to his personality. Keep writing!))
3245161 I'm glad you liked it, I thought it fit very well.
3245285 Sir yes Sir
Can we just download a full version " legally"?
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But then you end up getting all kinds of malware.
3467006 not always. Depends on where you go :P
Er, that was rather abrupt.
Kind of like strolling on the sidewalk and a car comes out of nowhere and runs your friend down. Well, that and the fall would have killed Arigos anyway, even if there was several copies of Will trying to act as a meat shield.
3791509 I was thinking a sudden turn of events would be interesting.
It's a great start and the story is really well thought out!
3871846 Thanks!
Gimme chapter 17 or perish.
What is your choice?