Colgate takes acid... and totally looses her FREAKING MIND!
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Scott Grimm
I just write for fun. Don't take things too seriously.
Scott Grimm
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Pretty high levels of lel so far, I couldn't really say there was anything wrong with it. Pacing is good, so is flow, I actually got into it and was able to picture everything in my head which is definitely a good thing. Just some minor grammar and punctuation errors but nothing major. Deserves a moustache.
are my sides ready for this?
Flossing! Flossing everywhere!!
Wow... What is she on and where can I get some?
2822250 Acid man... Acid
2822248 That idea can be used...
2822202 Indeed
2822133 I hope I did not disappoint
2822089 Yeah the grammar and punctuation is always my problem
2822078 That laugh... Freaking infectious!
Ok, cover image alone deserves a like for this. I'll read it soon, just working on my story right now.
Nice story! Just some punctuation problems... I really want to read more.
Well i have only one complaint and that is the cliffhanger of wasted Colgate since the second chapter isn't out yet
2822674 yeah... Imma meanie like that. Aren't I?
2822674 But chapter 2 is up now, so enjoy
soo...when you give colgate acid she gets pinkie powers?
anyway i really like the story so far. Keep writing more chapters
Brilliance.
2823161 Saddly now i have the same problem about chapter 3 you magnificent bastard
2823712 You have never seen what Acid or LSD can do to people i take it
Ponies on Acid... something that probably shouldn't be done but since it's happening, let's roll with it.
*TF2 Announcer* Let the games begin!
Dude, I love this story, can't wait for more!
Shit, though not as funny as the first chapter it was seriously impressive, I bucking love it, you did made some errors like putting hand where it should have been hoof but it's all chill, I'm excited for more
Anymore coming out? XDD I forgot I even read this!
Shit, have not seen this update for quite some time, glad to see a new chapter though
4001668 Yeah
. Every time I tried sitting down to write, I would get distracted. Plus with all the other aspects of my life occupying my time, I haven't been able to write at all.
Great story as always. I look forward to more of this hilarious tale.
4004152
she is going to feel terrible when that high is gone
Keep this going it's pretty great
4134456 I'm glad to hear you think that.
4135317 Yeah man, it's pretty humorous to read like I said keep it going. Untill of course the story ends hehe
First off, that is one hell of a trip Colgate is going to hate herself tomorrow.
If you don't mind, I found a few errors whist reading this. They're listed below.
'a something'?
*them
*too
Missing a "to" here.
*have
*backup
*or
These two sentences like each other a little too much...
*form
*stride
*roll
He is in a wheelchair, isn't he?
*seconds
*their sockets
Also related I think it would look rather odd if someone's eyes suddenly bolted out of his head like this. If anything he would be rushed to the hospital. It may be better to say something like "Quake Marble's eyes bulged out as he jerked his head back.". That way we aren't implying that his eyes actually left his skull.
--Sollace
The first thing I saw that made me scroll back up and pick this
The sentence that nearly caused me to wake everyone up by laughing
Colgate as yoda....need a video of it NOW
First comment for the chapta!!!,!!!!!!!
NOBODY ASKED YOU MOLESTIA 
2822700 I love your profile pic!
4934252 Haha thanks man, I was actually thinking about changing it. I've had it for thee longest time.
That's old man wisdom right there coming up.
Aw... It cuts off just as the ol' pony is about to solve everypony's problems.
Here are some mistakes I've noticed.
*carying
That second one is slightly redundant.
Octavia demanded this time rather than giving a subtle suggestion hoping to get the gears in the white mares mind running.
*"Vinyl, still..."
or
*"Vinyl was still..."
*that's
*rode
*the
*ever
--Sollace
4937886 Mucho gracithanks sir/mad'am... I can never assume with profile pics
. Yeah I don't have an editor so I do the best I can.. Obviously things get past me.
4951315
Sir, and you are welcome.
--Sollace
I wonder if I can ship Colgate and acid? Hmm. Fuck it, of course I can! I'm a brony!
And then the old man wisdom never came.
what........did.....I....just...read?
6046932 I do not know... But hopefully it was to your liking. :P
6046948 buh wuh......
you wrote typed it how can you not know what it is
just kidding it was hilarious and so far I want to see how it ends
MOAR!!!!!
I'll be honest I completely forgot I had this saved in my favorites
Bull. This is a comedy. There's always another way.
instant fave follow and like because this seems hilarious just by the description
7849657 Are we certain about that? Could be a twist!