Fiddlesticks and Octavia have always been inseparable. Ever since they were fillies that had been each others best friend. But when their Mother is stricken with an illness, they - along with the rest of the family - drift apart. In attempts to save her Mother, Octavia takes it upon herself to leave the family farm in pursuit of a more suitable means of making to money. In turn, Fiddlesticks is forced to say goodbye to her only sister, Octavia forever.
Awesome. So Tavi is an Apple huh? Sweet!
You have my favorite... Now you need to earn the right to stay in it! I DEMAND MORE CHAPTERS OF THIS QUALITY!!
Aww, Fi, now why'd you go an' say that? That ain't right, for no sister, to be talking to her sibling that way!
I look forward to the next chapter, pardner!
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3190872 I'm really glad you didn't end up hating it. The thread I posted on I just want a comment was actually downvoted. Not sure why, I just wanted a simple critique.
I relly like this story, i hope it will be continued as have potential. And truely, it think best write for your self, if popularity the only thing before your eyes, the fun to share a story loses from it's fun. Sure if becomes popular is a nice bonus, but nothing beats faithful fans then mass of nameless masses
Buy some apples?