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I call FIRST
2672175 Seriously Xinrick? Seriously?
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2672193Yes
yes I am
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Just be glad I didnt call first for both chapters
2672205
If anyone but you had put that on my first story on this site, I'd be a ball of living flame.
However, that picture of Pinkie made me smile. You're forgiven.
2672224Your most welcome
but people are starting to like it man. I cant wait to see whats next
(Lets hope its after the little rp or something)
2672230 I'll admit the RP gave me the original idea. However, I plan on running this somewhere else.
2672246Oh ok then man
just give me a call if you need an extra character or help man.
2672251 If I need something like that, there's an entire group of us to help. By the way, get to work on your story. I want to read how that's going to continue.
2672264Well how about you write more of this story
...
2672281 I have written both chapters of this story within the previous twelve hours, after a few changes in order to get approved with submission.
Besides, I'm debating on what I want to do in the next chapter. Something from the PoV of the Elements in the Black Cavern, or something more of what I hinted at in the first chapter.
2672303Well yeah. That always happens but I bet you'll figure it out
2672175 YOU VILL NEVAH BE FORGIVEN!
Good start, very interesting... Although, you already knew that, didn't you
You have my attention. I shall track this to see where it goes.
So we have...
... the mysterious object called the "seed" and that so far shows ambigous intentions.
... space humans who are considering every option from peacefull negotiation to mass annihilation.
Ill certainly keep an eye on this one.
2676392 It just wouldn't have that touch of humanity without the mass annihilation.
2675734 2674964 Glad to see more than just my friends commenting on this. I hope you end up liking where I want this to go.
2676488 Indeed, "Nuke it from Orbit" will always be an option.
What makes it feel good is that its one of many. No short-sightedness here.
Holy hell 34 likes
that never happened for me
but im glad that your story is getting such an awesome vote of confidence man
2677624 No idea what I did to earn an 11 to 1 like/dislike ratio. I'm just glad to finally have someone other than requesters get stories. And it's a good enough idea to make a good story out of it.
2677728Yeah. I have other ideas about stories but I dont know if I should write them because I have two stories to write but I dont know.
I told you that you would be a good writer.
But im glad that your getting good feed back on all of this.
2677734
As for your stories, find a topic you are really fanatic about. For me, it's tech/mech stuff. I can write about ten pages of stuff involving tech of some kind. I'm really into the futuristic sci-fi stuff.
On the other end of that spectrum, I have trouble writing any kind of papers for english classes. I can put out chapters like these, 6 or 7 pages long, in an hour if I get a good idea..
I spend about 4 hours figuring out how I want to start my papers. Then procrastinate that with youtube and games.
2677799doesnt every one do that last part?
but either way you have a point.
Oke, we are getting somewhere here. Both the Seed and the two escorts seem to have a sense of humor (albeit a dark one).
I think I just came.
*checks pants*
Yep, I came. 10/10 great job.
THE EMPEROR COMMANDS YOU
MORE GLORY FOR MAN!
THE EMPEROR COMMENDS YOUR SWIFTNESS!
YOU ARE TO BE TAKEN INTO THE RANKS OF REMEMBRANCERS! REJOICE!
this is good. its awsome to see that you are working on a story of your own^^
2684030 The seed is a little more than dark. While what I can say is limited because of spoilers, I will mention that Seed is a very interesting individual, and a complex person to write without completely devoting him to just a single style.
2684074 Thanks, I guess. I have no idea what that actually means, but it sounds like a pretty good compliment.
2684267 I finally had an idea pop into my head longer than ten minutes. So I started writing about it. It's turning out great so far, if these comments and favorites are anything to go by.
2684278
well I'm looking forward to more^^
it will be intresting to see where you decide to go with this story
2684282 I shall go wherever my brain leads me. And if I don't like that place I'll probably get a taxi back. My brain picks some bad places sometimes.
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hehe i know what thats like. sometimes it seems like a good idea, but when you go back to look at it you just think.
what the fuck was i thinking.
2684291 I think that more often than naught. And regret nothing.
Life is horrible if you regret all your decisions.
On the other hand, I have pretty bad decision making skills. Might be the worst combination to have in a person.
2684278 Sounds good to me.
Btw, I noticed that the story is set to mature and there is the dark tag but no gore, so I guess its safe to assume that we are in for some massive mindfuck?
2684300
There was a touch of it in this chapter, with the killing of both the manticore and hydra, and the mature comment covers the soldier-like interaction between Aphrodite, Ares, and Hades. However, for anything further I must refer you to the quoted comment above.
As for mindfuckery, I'm quite skilled at that
2684307
I'm looking forward to it.
YAY UPDATE
its still good my friends cant wait for more and keep up the good work
2684278
A REMEMBRANCER IS AN IMPERIALLY-SANCTIONED WRITER, SCULPTOR, POET OR ARTIST, TASKED WITH LEAVING GREAT MONUMENTS IN WORDS, ART OR STONE TO MARK THE GREAT ACHIEVEMENTS OF THE EMPEROR'S SPACE MARINE LEGIONS! REJOICE!
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In all seriousness though, sounds like a pretty important task.
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I AM NOT INFACT YELLING! YOU ARE MEARLY TRANSLATING MY PSYCHICALLY RELAYED WORDS INTO YELLING! NO DOUBT FROM DUE TO THE STRENGTH OF MY TELEPATHIC POWERS!
HURRAY! NEW CHAPTER!
The more I see of this, the more I am convinced the leaders are either completely inept or don't really want a peaceful solution.
Unless they pull a complete personality 180 and shift into Professional Mode when dealing with ponies, this team is just an international incident waiting to happen.
2691554 Ares and Hades are both soldiers under the command of Aphrodite right now. They act according to their orders given by Prophet, to protect her at all costs while trying not to cause an interplanetary incident, as well as following the commands given by her since she outranks them here.
Aphrodite is an air head at times, but knows when to get her shit together. There is a reason she was picked to lead the diplomatic group.
Also, this is the first time even meeting any equestrian species. They have no real idea how to act, and no idea what is hostile and what isn't, so they resort to normal Aetherian methods when something threatens them: Kill the fuck out of it.
2692033
The murderizing of the hydra and manticore is understandable, it was their interactions with each other that I saw as not exactly good examples of the kind of people you want on a diplomatic mission. Though, I suppose that true judgement would have to wait until they actually speak with ponies and/or the Princesses.
2692082 Yes, their interactions. All of the people under Prophet's command are soldiers of a sort, so they act accordingly. While around authority, or when necessary, they are prime examples of discipline.
However, out in the field amongst themselves they will act like the best of friends and joke with each other.
Ares was sent specifically because he could murderize just about anything. Prophet didn't know what they would encounter, and sent his most dangerous soldier there. Hades is kind of a balance to him, thinks things through before killing, but is still quite lethal.
Aphrodite on the other hand, she is dangerous in her own right.
Out of the three of them, in a hierarchy focused around military accomplishments, Aphrodite is unbelievably a higher rank than Ares. She doesn't have quite the kill count, but she is still very dangerous and not to be underestimated.
Aetherians showing off their superiority to these primitives? Javik approves.
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Primitives never cease to underestimate more advanced species.
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That picture is so accurate it hurts.
2696987 Just as I had planned. Now I will feed off your pain, mortal and BECOME THE MOST POWERFUL BEING IN THE UNIVERSE!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
2696706
Agreed brother.
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