Twilight had always noticed a few things wrong here and there, but she had always thought it was just in her head.
Unfortunately, she isn't in her head in the first place.
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What the hell?
This is weird...and im getting very weird vibes from this
But ill read this through. Keep up the good work man.
And first
3088055 You wanna know what I think of your 'first' comments?
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3088060What did I do
3088063 I have a severe dislike of 'first' trollers.
You're fine, it's just a simple table flip.
3088067Ok man sorry
I was planning on doing some story similar to this.
Nice job, it reminds me a bit of the book The Maze Runner.
Same this was so short, but it was good!
So do you intent to write more or is it really already over?
Anyway it was really good even if it leaves a lot of open questions if you don't intend to go on with this.
3089360 It really is a oneshot, just something I worked on the side while I'm working on the Sequel/Epilogue for From Beyond.
Which should, hopefully, be up soon with a chapter or two. College has eaten a lot of my freetime.
Well.
That was unsettling.
Wow.
That was deeper than I expected it to be .
7364958 Wow, how far did you have to dig to find this thing?
7364982
About five minutes.
Short story and good enough rating
7364982
I just had a gut feeling and it was right.
This was great and kinda creepy in the right way.