The Tree

Apple Bloom has discovered a disturbing secret about Sweet Apple Acres. Applejack is determined to show her sister that it's not so disturbing after all. That is, if Apple Bloom will stop screaming about it.

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Dyna

Dyna #1 · May 28th, 2013 · · ·

Apple Bloom, do you realise your last line could be interpreted differently...?

Lord of Nothing

Lord of Nothing #2 · May 28th, 2013 · · ·

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Intentional?

Seether00

Seether00 #3 · May 28th, 2013 · 1 · ·

This reminds of a story where Apple Bloom raises a tree and it turns out to be a cherry tree. Still Granny Smith with the life lesson.

elue1234

elue1234 #4 · May 28th, 2013 · · ·

* Reads last line*, *Reads first comment* *snickers* * reads last line again* *Gets lost in a laughing fit.*

conantheimp

conantheimp #5 · May 28th, 2013 · · ·

Every day, she awoke either at or when the rooster crowed,

odd phrasing here...

And Oh lordy that last line!

TBH that Story Description reads like a Dark fic. Like, pony-eating trees or something.

Zeyon The Green

Zeyon The Green #6 · May 28th, 2013 · 1 · ·

Well that would probably be outside of Applebloom's cute marks control, but the Apple family is huge for a reason...

DetectivePingles

DetectivePingles #7 · May 28th, 2013 · 2 · ·

Now I want to grow fire-breathing tomatoes.

Dyna

Dyna #8 · May 28th, 2013 · 1 · ·

2640875 Well, in broad sense, one could, I suppose, interpret "family making" as something such as a family counsellor, relationship advisor, matchmaker (I know there's the 'love poison' incident, but they weren't doing it to get a Cutie Mark that time...), artificial intelligence creator etc......

Fluttersnipe

Fluttersnipe #9 · May 28th, 2013 · 1 · ·

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Don't try to fool yourself. We all know what she meant! ...or...didn't mean, because, she's...too young, or...
Screw it! It's funny!

Niklashg

Niklashg #10 · Jun 7th, 2013 · 1 · ·

2641857 i'm almost sure there is a mod for that if you have minecraft.

Godzillawolf

Godzillawolf #11 · Jun 22nd, 2013 · · ·

Now that is one of the sweetest things ever! Great work!

I love your imagery of the story! It's absolutely breathtaking!

And you do a wonderful job making the apples a family. I loved it!

Alchemystudent

Alchemystudent #12 · Jul 4th, 2013 · · ·

Came in, expecting something involving famlies and trees and this is what I get?

Good job.

Draco Dei

Draco Dei #13 · Oct 29th, 2013 · · ·

Every day, she awoke either at or when the rooster crowed, grabbed a quick bite to eat, and set out for Curtis.
-"at or when" doesn't quite seem right to me.

Huh, wonder what a pegasu was doing here so early.
-pegasus

Oh dearie, ya could grow fire-breathing tomatoes and I wouldn’t kick ya off the farm.
-Those probably exist, in the Everfree if nowhere else.

2641000
Link Please?

keam

keam #14 · Jan 2nd, 2014 · 2 · ·

“So... you’re saying I should get my Cutie Mark in family making?”
Oh, Apple Bloom!
Apple Bloom: “So... you’re saying I should get my Cutie Mark in family making?”
Apple Jack: No!