Something is bothering Sunset Shimmer. Lately, after finishing cleaning up parts of the school, she's been hearing noises from the empty building, especially the theater department. Concerned, her friends decide to go investigate.
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This made me laugh. Have a mustache, good sir
This was pretty fun. Makes me miss the stories I used to read back in middle and high school.
Pete doesn't happen to be missing a nose, does he?
Hmm. Personally, I thought Rarity's and Fluttershy's behavior was pretty cruel, even if the others forgave them in the end. They went so far as scaring Pinkie to tears and still don't think that they may have gone too far? Huh.
But yeah, other than that, it was a good read.
Well, that was honestly pretty great! I like how you incorporated Flutterbat into the EQG world, and that last line was unbelievably funny, for some reason. Good job!
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That was actually rather amusing. Not quite what I expected, either.
yay flutterbats back shes cute
I need to see the rest of the end!
That ending HAHA
Awesome story, man. Especially with the flutterbat part at the end. I give you a 8 out of 10.
Fun story. Nice non-magical world twist on the whole Flutterbat thing. I'm just dissapointed that it wasn't actually a real thestral.
That's worded a bit oddly. Should that be just the air?
Almighty janitor, indeed.
I was actually surprised by that ending, nice job!
The ending XD
I saw it coming and yet still am pleasantly surprised, ahah! Well done!
A hilarious scooby doo like mystery.
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Yup. This really did remind me of Scooby Doo. This is a MLP version of a Scoony Doo Mystery.