Midnight Bolt and Amethyst Star were happy with living with their loving mothers Rainbow Dash and Twilight Sparkle.
When a argument falls into a dreadful mistake Amethyst and Midnight find themselves in the past were they aren't even born yet. This is the story of them trying to get back to their present.
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There is no relation between my other story, besides that it is Twidash
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Hmmm. You have piqued my interest. I'll be keeping an eye on this one.
can you update more please? think it's cool
Most interesting. Though I'm a bit confused about how Twi became royalty without becoming an alicorn. Also, apparently they are in a caste with guards, but not in Canterlot. Where, exactly, are they? aside from that, I will be reading with utmost enthusiasm.
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I am hoping to answer some questions in the next few chapters. I look for things to poke at peoples curiosity
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Heh, I'm trying to make more time for writing, which equals more updates on my stories.
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Thanks! Tis what I aim for.
Sounds interesting, gonna read these story later when there are more chapters.
color me interested
Interesting story, tracking, also no tags?
My only issue so far is that a lot of the dialogue seems too mechanical. Not enough contractions, I think. I see a lot of 'we will', 'I will' etc. when 'We'll' or 'I'll' would fit better, especially in the younger characters.
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I'll keep that in mind.
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Yeah, I might have just skipped that part. Any suggestions?
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Well I better start writing then!
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Romance for first instance, Alternate Universe I think too.
Hello readers!
I wanted to try something out with this fic. I want YOU, the reader to influence the pull of the story.
I am working on chapter two right now, and it shall have Amethyst, and Midnight but I haven't thought of anypony else.
Please comment if you have a suggestion.
Right now I can veer off towards being more in depth with Rainbow and Twilight.(Grown up, like age not sex.)
or I can just add more to the main story with Amethyst and Midnight.
If you would like to see something else just leave a comment.
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Implied sex between midnight and amethyst
If I am the only one who votes I demand you make it so
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Uhh, you realize that they are brother and sister right?
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Yes
no incest.
Anyways I had a couple of people PM me what they wanted and I was able to squeeze it into Chapter 2. I hope you enjoy her as I had making her.
Yes, the stories are better with lesbians,
I must say that is a bit confusing chapter, but is OK.
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I know I put a few more things in the story that would create questions, but this is still the beginning of the story. Any specific questions? I will try and answer them as soon as possible.
more plz
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A short chapter on Dash and Twi is the next 'chapter'. So more is coming soon
i love it a lot great job and i can't wait to see more chapters for this story when they come out
Nice chapter
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Thanks! That really makes me want to write more!
3121626 Your welcome and yay