After a long day of working, Rainbow Dash asks Twilight to spend some time with her.
Twilight agrees. This night will be different from the others.
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Crystal Night
Reading, writing, drawing and playing. That's my life. A normal teenager life. Also I'm Portuguese /)
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what is this random randomness?
Awww that was cute.(squee)
6207360 me writing!
6207711 I'm glad you like it.
This is what I feel like I'd do if I stayed up to late writing a chapter of my own. Good, but missing words, misspelled words, and bad grammar. I give it
out of 
6208808 That's good, right?? Thanks
Also I wrote this late night...
The two laid
edin bedfeelings about
aboutherTwilight's house had an open window
I love it! I always love when I turn on my computer and find new TwiDashs(es?) waiting!
6209577 yup, it's good. Thought it is the lowest I've ever rated a story (mainly because if the story sucked, I left without doing anything) it was only because of the grammar. Get an editor or someone to go over and fix it and it would be great (and less confusing).
Best way to respond to people who say 'I love you' is kissing them.
10/10 would favorite again.
6209583 Thanks
I will fix that.
6210201 Totally
6209727 Probably not my best story, I think my second is better, but I still enjoyed.
6210201 Ha ha ha haaaaa. I wouldn't recommend that. You never know if they're being jerks. I tread carefully because any time someone ever said they loved me, it was a prank.
The errors made it painful to read. The romance felt (was) rushed. And the structure was flimsy. Other than that, it was enjoyable. 6/10 for good start.
6223068 Midnight writing...never again...but thanks!
6223142
I know what you mean. Things seem much better when you're running on moonlight.
6223150 Yeah, until you almost fell asleep.
It was quite hasty, and some inproper grammar here and there. It was quite good though, are you new at writing? If so, keep up! You have great potential
6231974 Thanks, I'm trying to improve my writing.