Luna drops the soap and what began as an uneventful bath turns into a nonsensical fight for the castle.
Spanish Translation: https://www.deviantart.com/spaniard-kiwi/art/A-Luna-se-le-cae-el-jabon-1022794836
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Nice little story, descriptive enough to allow the reader to picture what happen.
We need more ridiculous Lunaa and Celestia stories like this.
I USE SOAP ELEMENTAL!
I loled a considerable amount.
Cute.
(THOU ART A VERY SILLY PONY INDEED! KNOW THAT --)
(*Ahem*. Indoor voice, Luna.)
(*grumbles* We are never going to get used to this... *Ahem* Know thee, then, that thy tale of soapy woe hath amused us greatly!)
That was entertaining.
Next time get soap on a rope.
That was a really funny story and I did laugh a lots at the stuff that was happening.
*Grins* very cute fun, I wasn't entirely clear on whether Luna was imagining everything of if it did genuinely occur though
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She's imagining everything. Guess I could have made that a little clearer.
2736403 *Nods* I honestly thought she was serious and was kinda amazed that the guards immediately knew what she was wanting ^^; Still a great fic, so don't let my confusion detract from anything. This really was a sweet appealing little fic. I loved seeing Luna getting so into it and then fighting the soap elemental.
I'm speechless... This was fantastic, the only reason I can have comments right now is because my mind is still working.
I didn't realize it was a playtime thing until the elemental came out. I actually though Discord was behind this, then I thought it a dream when the elemental came out. Kapow! Bathtime playtime for lulu! Great show.
Her imagining it all was not clearly communicated.
Besides that...this one was clever. You say you did it for fun but it had heart. Be proud! Well done!
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAA!
Aw heck,
Nice job.
Soap Elemental should be a pokemon.
I laughed so hard! Good show, sir! (or madame)
Kind of sad that she's just imagining all of that, still pretty funny though.
lol, this is so me. It starts out with a random, but logical, thought and very quickly escalates to this.......
Why, during that entire exchange, did I suddenly imagine Princess Luna proclaiming: "IN THE NAME OF THE MOON, WE SHALL PUNISH YOU!! And why does that seem so, so perfect?
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This was a very fun little one-shot. I especially like how the very simple idea of losing one's soap escalates quickly into a life-or-death battle of epic proportions . . . in Luna's head alone. Keep up the great work!
This was very funny
I love stories with silly princesses.
Well done!
i did not find this funny nd i know why it wasdone well but puberty has been making me an asshole latley but its really goodand i think i should stop watching gang land cause when i read luna dropped the soap my mind wandered to a prisoner and a weaker prisoner which now reminds me of luna and celestia oh gosh why
Great story, I got a few lols out of it.
I quite enjoyed that fantastic story! Couldn't control my laughter when the cook said it got in the soup.
thinking about it... Discord created soapy slippery roads during his rampage...
I fear for my sanity thinking about the implications!
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Implications?
3197901 ...leaving something untold makes it a lot creepier than explaining, because our brain fear what doesn't know instinctively. Is the reason why we fear the dark (we don't know what could hide in it, so pur brain tag it as dangerous) or why the Slenderman is so creepy: there is no real explanation to what it is and what it does.
ps wow i'm an eggehead fineartamerica.com/images-simple-print/images-medium/egghead-kimber-fiebiger.jpg
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Of course. I just didn't know if you were thinking Discord had some role in this story or if you were merely making a comparison or something.
This is hilarious and I'm going to bring down the moon itself trying to record it tomorrow.
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Record it?
That was one of the funniest stories I have read in a long time
Great job 
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Thanks!
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Yes, sorry for the delay. I did get around to doing so after 7 or 8 attempts and every possible issue you could imagine along the way this week.
This may answer your questions.
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Nice!
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I just realized you are also the author of How To Preen Your Chicken.
So by some random chance you managed to get two recordings back to back haha.
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I'm smooth like that.
Just don't look at my other fics or I may have 3+ recordings back to back...
are ALL your stories this amazingly adorable?
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Keep reading and find out...
Luna has QUITE the imagination, I see.
Can Luna not use her magic in the bath or something?
or is she....... not an Alicorn here?
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One never uses magic in the bath. Didn't your mother ever teach you this?
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No........ I'm Rainbow Dash........ I don't use magic......
It's 10 am, I woke up, read this story and almost died of laughter. This adventure made my day.
And everything started because a green block of soap was slippery. Hope i can read more stories like this one to start my day.
Keep this awesome and silly humor and ppppplllllleeeeeeaaaaasssseeee make more.
I WANT MOOOORRREEEEE
Oh...oh sweet Celestia, I can't breathe!
That was beautiful, simply beautiful!
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Thanks so much!
Ho, this is so much better than this thing.
Hysterical, exciting and adorable.
I love it.
~Leonzilla
7163863 Thank you!
Was expecting something else from a story called, "Luna drops the soup." ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Perverted jokes aside, this story was hilarious.
I was grinning throughout the whole thing. Such an imagination, Luna! I could imagine this actually happening, I mean I always fight the Soap. It's a very dangerous enemy indeed ...
Twilight approves of this.
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Thank you!