Young Love

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After Octavia and Vinyl Scratch spend the night together, is there more to it than just one night? Is Vinyl right in just leaving Octavia by herself? And why is Vinyl so bad at navigation, dammit?

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psp7master

psp7master #1 · May 21st, 2013 · · ·

Nice, sweet and funny. The pacing's rushed, IMO, but then again, it's a one-shot. Glad you followed my (and other people's) advice and wrote a real, decent OctaScratch shipfic.

Mariacheat-Brony

Mariacheat-Brony #2 · May 21st, 2013 · · ·

Niiiice!
Great story, really funny and all!
a five out of five in my book
I'm really curious about how Vinyl found her way back to Octavia's place now

Blueninetails

Blueninetails #3 · May 21st, 2013 · · ·

Hm....I'm honestly not sure how to feel about this. I mean I liked the plot line, and absolutely thought it was very sweet, but it still felt a little...ehh.... It felt like a small element was missing, but I can't quite figure it out. Well, in any case I still liked it, it was a little funny, and it is rather interesting to see Vinyl be somewhat annoyed for once over something like this. (Usually, it's Octavia)

Jlargent

Jlargent #4 · May 21st, 2013 · · ·

They're polar opposites Dubstep VS Symphonies it's that sort of thing that attract each other.

SolidFire

SolidFire #5 · May 22nd, 2013 · · ·

Oh my...an author that specializes in Octa-Scratch stories...I think I am going to enjoy this.

Dark Flame

Dark Flame #6 · May 22nd, 2013 · · ·

Lol nice one shot man really liked it very funny

DoctorSpectrum

DoctorSpectrum #7 · May 23rd, 2013 · · ·

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Yeah, I definitely felt like I was rushing it towards the end. It got to a point whilst I was writing it when I said "I just want to finish this damn thing tonight and get it over and done with!", so I can certainly admit that I rushed it.

2612520
I actually have been meaning to write some other fics for a while now, but I keep getting good OctaScrach ideas. Glad to see you're interested, though!

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I hope that using the vectorised version is okay?

Shadow_Wolf