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DoctorSpectrum

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  • Vinyl and Octavia Have Multiple Dates
    Now that they've admitted their feelings for one another, there's only one thing for Vinyl and Octavia to do: dating!

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This story is a sequel to Vinyl and Octavia are Forcibly Shipped

Ninjas attack! What are Vinyl and Octavia going to do to stop them? Who's behind the attack? What do they want with the two mares? And why is Vinyl suddenly so flirty towards Octavia?

The Vinyl and Octavia Series

1. Vinyl and Octavia Machete Their Way Through the Jungle

2. Vinyl and Octavia Move House

3. Vinyl and Octavia Get Incredibly Drunk

4. Vinyl and Octavia are Forcibly Shipped

5. Vinyl and Octavia Fight Ten Thousand Ninjas

6. Vinyl and Octavia Have Multiple Dates

7. Vinyl and Octavia Engage in Roleplay

8. Vinyl and Octavia in 'Dial D for Detectives'

9. Vinyl and Octavia Duel Destiny

First Published
28th Oct 2013
Last Modified
28th Oct 2013

Comments ( 28 )

#1 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·

Perhaps i picked the wrong day,

To try on my Nightmare Night Ninja costume.

*Looks at his freshly seperated torso*

Yes a most unfortunate time indeed.

*Falls in half slow motion style*

Oh dear it seems i may require aid,

.....And alot of glue.

#2 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3412526

Nah, I'll just give you to pinkamena. She loves when ponies are already good for pickings.

#3 · 46w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

This is one of the strangest things I've ever read. Still, seeing as you have finally made Vinyl and Tavi express their feelings for each other, I give you a fave, a like, and will be waiting for the next fic, which, if my estimations are correct, will be even strange. Really, Spectrum. You're a weird guy. And I like you. :heart:

#4 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3412570

I fear i due not understand you good sir,

However this may be due to massive bloodloss.

#5 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3412633

To be honest, I was debating doing the same thing I had with the previous stories in the series (i.e. as much UST as is humanly possible), but in the end I decided that by having them admit their feelings for each other, it both adds character development, sets up a sequel, and it feels like a natural progression of the relationship of the two.

Glad to hear you liked it! :twilightsmile:

#6 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·

“Sweet as name,” said the other stallion.

I think you wanted 'sweet ass name'.

'nother good story, bro. And the first I've read in a while.

#7 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3412697

No typo there broski :twilightsmile:

It's like, "That name is sweet as!" sorta thing. Is this my Australian-isms confusing everyone? Do people in other places in the world say "Sweet as"?

#8 · 46w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

Love ur humor! Had me laughing all the way thru....the maid was well done...I half expected her to suddenly break out the lemon pledge (consuela from family guy style) lol hahaha can't wait to see what happens next

#9 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3412751

Yeah, but not like that. The way you have that it seems as though it is a fragmented sentence. So the name is sweet. Sweet as what? Or is it something else is as sweet as name? If the latter, what is 'name'? Your simile is missing what it is being compared to... wait. You aren't using it as a simile. No. America doesn't use that.

#10 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3412774

Shall we agree that B.D. has bad grammar and doesn't realise what he's talking about? I think that this is a cultural thing, because I say things like, "That's cool as!" all the time without comparing things and whatnot.

#11 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3412790

In America, we say "That's cool as shit" or some variation. As I said, you simile is missing what it is being compared to. But, different cultures. I get enough of it when I edit for this(>>3412633) fucker.

And we can agree about that.

#12 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·

You are incredibly strange....

#13 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·

You are incredibly strange....

#14 · 46w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

:rainbowlaugh:

That it is all.

#15 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·

O_O WELP! Might as well check out the last 3. :pinkiehappy:

#16 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3413696

Each story in the series is a stand-alone story, so you don't have to read the others, but there are certainly references and allusions, so it doesn't hurt to read the others.

#17 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3412697

That's an Aussie thing.

#18 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3414170

I know. I was referring to cultural things.

#19 · 46w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

What a blast from the past, it's like Kill Bill all over again. I say you did fine indeed il mio amico.

#20 · 46w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

“Hey, the old Deus Ex Machina 9000 is a good model!” Vinyl said, grinning.

Well played.

#21 · 46w, 12h ago · · ·

“Well, now that you mention it, I’ve got the oddest feeling that we’ve got an obligation to fight ten thousand ninjas,” Octavia admitted.

They did...    

Rutona replied, clearly speaking through gritted teeth, “Susake and Kurasa,

Word scramble time.  

R-u-t-o-n-a

N-a-r-u-t-o (hard)

S-u-s-a-k-e

S-a-s-u-k-e  (very easy)

K-u-r-a-s-a

S-a-k-u-r-a (medium)

K-a-s-h-i-k-a

K-a-k-a-s-h-i  (I'm partial to Kappa Mikey's Dr. Takashi)

M-a-r-u-o-r-o-c-h-i

O-r-o-c-h-i-m-a-r-u (easy)

R-a-i-y-a-j-i

J-i-r-a-i-y-a (very hard)

Though all of them were easy once you got the theme.  The hint was Shadow Clone, I think.

To be honest, I was debating doing the same thing I had with the previous stories in the series (i.e. as much UST as is humanly possible), but in the end I decided that by having them admit their feelings for each other, it both adds character development, sets up a sequel, and it feels like a natural progression of the relationship of the two.

I would have found it twice as funny if watching their alternate selves make out quashed the romantic feeling they built up.  But this is okay too.

So happy to see you write this, and promise another.

#22 · 46w, 10h ago · · ·

>>3431462

I was wondering when someone would call me out on the names of the ninjas :twilightblush:

Glad to hear you liked it! :twilightsmile:

#23 · 45w, 6d ago · · ·

damn fine work there is one phrase that i think you mis typed "Her slash had missed Octavius and she hooves had gone past him, but there was no reason for her to consider it a failed attack"

i think you ment her hooves

but otherwise DAMN FINE WORK DUDE

#24 · 45w, 5d ago · · ·

>>3435630

Whoops. Thanks for picking that up.

#25 · 45w, 2d ago · 2 · ·

I have a few questions.

1. How did I find this Fic.

2. Why did I not read this earlier?

3. Why doesn't this have much more views, likes, and faves?

Seriously, this was one of the best... I don't even know how to truly describe this Fic, but it was absolutely amazing.

#26 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·

>>3452487

I guess the wacky premise combined with the high word count is off-putting to some people? Glad to hear you liked it nonetheless!

(I hate myself for writing this, but why not check out some of the other stories in the series?)

#27 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·

Was it just me or did that kinda sound like naruto ninja names:rainbowhuh:

#28 · 38w, 4d ago · 2 · ·

I was not expecting rule 63...

Still fun!:pinkiehappy:

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