Discord, Trixie, Gilda, Lightning Dust, Flim, and Flam. What do they have in common? They were all rejected by their friends, acquaintances, and Equestria.
By a few stokes of luck, and a little magic, somehow they find each other. And suddenly they feel welcome for a change.
18000 words...
Discord...
Trixie...
About 6 months old...
How has no one commented?!
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I don't know. My other story has a lot of comments.
Then again, that story has a descriptive title/picture and one of the main characters slaps Celestia in the first chapter.
If I really wanted attention I could just write a spin-off of a popular story or character like RealityCheck did, or I could compete in the December writers competition, or I could actually try to advertise the stuff, or I could write a bunch of one-shots...
But I kind of like not advertising my stories, it's more like they're hidden treasures that way... if they do happen to be good... I would like some critiques though.
3455053 Bro/sis/pony, do you want me to Shamelessly Promote this?
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You would do that!?
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discord needs chaos it feeds HIM
oh boy lightning dust, flim and flam, trixie, and discord all in one place! were doomed!....or this will be awesome can't wait to see
ah trixie wonder how you will "slap: celestia I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE IT!
until than
Why is this awesome story on hiatus?!?!
I'll collaborate with you
What’s that?
Wait, how does that work?
Aren’t those the same thing?
I mean, that is true.
Really?
So magic comes from emotions?
What is she doing?
Hey, that’s a record.
It is?
How much screaming would it take for her to bust someone’s eardrums? Because, there’s no way no one hasn’t gone deaf.
Well, at least we now know who’s the most violent out of the princesses.
I’ll be honest, I was confused about this episode.
Something tells me both motion and lightning dust is going to get jumped by the whole whether team.
Was this chapter supposed to be cute?