Travel Agent

by Knight Joy

Till further noticed.

Please before you say anything. This story needs work....like....well i really shot far and now looking at it....i kinda shot a bigger target then i hope. SOOO i will fix it, i will make it better, and i'll get to it. Just need to let you know that if you read it word for word....

It sucks but hey being gone for a while open my eyes to lots of things....one is how to make mistakes. XD without further due this story will be....hahaha....yeah i know but i have...no i need to say it.

This story will be on hold for a...hmmm...a week. That should get me to fix and make a damn plot out of this. I mean wow i kinda wrote it at the top of my head and thanks to people that were first to read it and help me fix it...well lets just say people who correct others...don't take it to heart, if you think about it....they are helping you in MORE ways then correcting a spell error. For correcting someone in a way you can see what they see in your stories and so on.

Kay....I'mma start fixing stuff and....hey maybe i can write another story....hmmm i don't know only time would tell.

Comments

[Distorted Flare]

I am no use for proof reading but I can help with the story idea if you are interested?

[Knight Joy]

4631413 Yeah sure i'm open for ideas. I'm writing the plot on paper and other things so i can see timeline and stuff. hahaha ^_^

[Nova Nexus]

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4632275 I feel like these rape fics are so wrong, but that's what makes them so right!

[Zeraligator]

I feel as if a week has past already is there a chapter coming soon? Do hope so, goodbye.

[DJ Deathboot]

Sweet

[Worthy King]

Can't wait!

[Worthy King]

4682960 that moment u see that rape face (my outro song)

[SilentMech]

Okay, the only advice I can give you is in regards to the whole species thing. Decide on one, then have every one but Jean stick to their subspecies, for example, Luna and Celestia have a horn and wings without fail, or an analogous replacement that they share with all ponies, Twilight always has a horn or its appropriate analog, Rainbow Dash always has wings or an appropriate analog, and so on. You can have them be human in form and call them a human version of it, like A Stranger in a Familiar Land has (Valkyries, Trifects, Etherials, Agronauts), or you could just call them by their pony races but have a different race classification.

[Resadur164]

quite certain that this is dead

[Thicsalt]

So it is gone man it looks really good

[DarkKing2]

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Don't tell me you gave up on this story because it just got good and who cares for a little bit misspelling.