>>411549411549

No, not at all. The irony is that in the post where I said I'd left a comma out, you found a genuine mistake, rather than the deliberate error.

Also I forgot to answer your question about Apology: It's almost all true, with the exception of the whole 'hallucination and torture' thing -- and the fact that I'd say 'no' to Celestia (I mean, really!).

>>411402411402

I fail to see the irony. Did I make a comma-related mistake, chapters 9 and 10 are those on which I started pointing out these mistakes, or what?

>>410941410941

The irony is delicious; better make that two missing commas!

>>410821410821

for Luna's sake use the occasional comma - should be

for Luna's sake, use the occasional comma

Now I've had my monthly dose of comma.

On a more serious note, I'll read C9 and 10 later and check what's so great about them. Hopefully I'll spot a comma or two missing!

>>410357410357

Hey, I'm the one doing the research here! You're not supposed to investigate me back!

Joking aside: I like everything I post (because if I don't like it, I don't see why you should). Wasp is certainly not a throwaway; it's my big project, and it's hard to compare it with Apology. Apology is a silly idea that gave me a break from Wasp; it's also something short I can give to people who know I write pony but won't read 130K of SF.

Why have I started thanking for 'favs'? Well, on a long story a fav is a tracking tool; on a short one it's a 'thank you', so it only seemed polite. I've also started thanking for 'watches', which I probably should have done long ago.

In terms of what I think is my 'best'... chapters 9/10 of Wasp, with 19 a close second.

Of everyone who's commented, you're the one who's had the most effect on my writing; without your  'for Luna's sake use the occasional comma' post I'd still be blissfully ignorant.

So just for you, I left out a comma.

>>408339408339

So I was right, you are thanking everyone for favouriting "By way of an Apology". Do you consider it to be your magnum opus and DOW&S some throwaway story? I'm really curious about that.

Also, start forgetting commas again, reading a fanfic with perfectly placed commas is unnerving.

P.S As we're on my user page, and as I don't have any stories, there won't be many visitors here. So tell me, how much of "By way of an Apology" was true and what was not?

I'm joking, of course, but when I first read it it all seemed so true; a sign of your master storytelling.

Thanks for the 'fav' on Apology, and thanks for all your comments on Wasp. I appreciate it all, I really do.