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The start of a series that follows the adventures of two friends who are sent to the land of Equestria. While spending time in the wondrous land they form friendships, connections and learn some truly valuable lessons that reflects personal issues as well as discovering deeper meaning of what it means to be a true friend.

Chapters (25)
Comments ( 64 )

Date

- A specific point of time

-A get together of two entities (mostly the opposite sex) to progress a relationship

-A set moment in a specific point of time

:twilightsmile:

Wouldn't it be ironic if they were trapped in the everfree forest?

Umm...hello, is this thing on, hello?

*clears throat*umm...okay, Rainbow Dash, I have a special message to you...

KARMA'S A BUCKING BITCH AIN'T IT?!:pinkiecrazy:

Two boy's are sent to Ponyville by an unknown source.

Please fix.

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Because I asked nicely? :twilightsmile:

2504335 Lol I'm willing to do it but I don't see a reason.

Too long?

Dear author, in this realm of literature(fimfiction.net) there is no such thing as 'too long', especially when the story is interestingly awesome:pinkiehappy:

I can just imagine this playing while they were slow dancing

Oh dear chapter, why have you come to control me so:fluttercry:...HAVEN'T MY FEELS SUFFERED ENOUGH!!:flutterrage:

Now you made me all mushy and sappy...I'm loving every second of it:heart::pinkiecrazy:

It says the story is still incomplete will there be a next chapter after this :duck:

2509401 I forgot about that, it's fixed. Thanks for reminding me. Also, no, no new chapters.

Chrysalis is too OP:ajbemused:

Then, from the depths of the mind of The Watcher...

*Hallelujah Choir Sings*
GO CMC!!:pinkiehappy::yay:

...Beautiful, Just Spiffingly Beautiful:pinkiesad2:

Thank you for writing this....

2511015 Thank you for reading, I can't thank you enough actually :twilightsmile:

.....Bloody beautiful work mate.

I loves this story :heart::pinkiehappy:

2511240 The one I used I randomly found on google but for other stained glass MlP pictures you would want to look for Akili-Amethyst, you can find her on deviantart. I don't know if she does requests.

yes a nother fan of the kingdom hearts series

I'm actually wondering since with that last page with the stange mare and i think memori are you going to make a like socond book or something? Cause that would be awsome and would answer a few questions people are going to have.

2514074 I'd like to do that, the "last" chapter was meant to be a special kind of ending to see if readers would be interested in what it was I had there. If you all want there is definitely more to be had. "The world revisited as a new number" :raritywink:

Wow, I got attached to this story in two days time, a wonderful reading session :pinkiehappy:

Though, the ending was a bit sad, but they will remember each other, Best of friends, till the end...

(Why does feels always follow me!)

2515856 When one door is closed, another is opened :raritywink:

Twilight stopped jumping,"Oh. Well that's what I do best!"

Twilight? You mean Pinkie. :facehoof:

oh god my sides XD

I can just imagine Babe singing this to fluttershy (before they knew about the memory erasing)

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Maybe before I killed your body:pinkiecrazy:

(In reality, maybe in some point of time inside this site?)

...I started reading this at 1:00 AM.
HOW DID YOU TELL THE RIGHT TIME?!

You said on author's support that you would like critique. Would you like a private message or would you like me to comment directly on your story?

After Babe gave up pinching himself:

AJ: I'll be glad to buck you in the face

Babe: That might wor...AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!

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