Sweetie Belle is adopted by Applejack, and finds out the hard way how strict, stern, and brutally old fashioned and superstitious the Apple Family really is.
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I rarely ever say i hate a fic that isn't mindless guro like cupcakes. but this one, with the religious anti-magic sentiment and foal beating just... ugh.
I'm sorry because this is actually well written, it's just everything that's happening that makes me sick.
I recognise skill when i see it, it's here. this story is well crafted, the story flows, the characters have reasons for what they do, even if they're incredibly wrong minded.
The problem, is me. problems and overcoming adversity is what makes a good story, but for me, i come to FIM for an escape from the dark side of reality for a dark fantasy. This... this just hits too close to reality for me.
For my part, i wish you the best of luck in the future with this story, but i will not be reading it, because reading things like this upsets me to the point where my own creativity literally shuts down for days at a time.
Best of luck to you.
You bastard! Leaving us on a cliffhanger that intense!
You had better update soon.
2919111 RAWR
2919109 Well, I appreciate your respect for this story's...creativity, and thanks for not flaming it like a lot of people did (i continued to write for those who like it.) Sweetie Belle gets her revenge, don't worry. Um...sorry i killed your creativity. thanks for the comment.
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This was a good precursor to Hoof Beatin. As usual you make great chapters. Yes it feels me with righteous rage, and anticipation to see Sweetie Belle get her vengeance. That and Twilight finally get off her plot and fix whatever damage the Apples did to Sweetie.