Sweetie Belle is adopted by Applejack, and finds out the hard way how strict, stern, and brutally old fashioned and superstitious the Apple Family really is.
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Nice chapter. Did a good job linking last chapter in this, and explaining why Scoots was back in that Tartarus Pit.
From the next chapter's title. I can guess that either Twilight or Sweetie gets more damaged than before, and we saw the backlash from Scoots parents mouthing off as a minor affair. But Twilight is a direct threat to Apple Jack's machinations, and I can't wait to see both how Sweetie gets better enough to give AJ the Foal-con Punch of Magical Justice we were promised [paraphrased], and when either Celestia or Luna make their numerous background visits to Ponyville / Twilight, then finally do something.
I mean I saw only one fic where Celestia was pissed at Apple Jack and let her know it in this chapter. And it was awe inspiring and got me thinking about this fic. To tell you the truth. AJ's superstitious nonsense, almost murdering a foal [in this case a colt], and working on a corrupt religion that Bastardized Celestia's core principals all hit a nerve as I compared that to this. And this AJ's worse. By far. But seeing her reaction to a truly peeved Celestia gave me many happy thoughts . And if your Zealot AJ is better than that Zealot AJ. Then I so hope that if Twi bites the dust, or looses her horn and somehow lives. And some how Celestia comes down to save the day. I am so hoping that your Peeved Celestia is more bad ass than that Peeved Celestia in the linked chapter.
Although I will always love the idea of Sweetie just tearing the Apple Family to shreds and bathing in a rain of their blood. Or thrashing AJ into submission. But with her Injuries I guess I'll have to wait.
But here they've been in the background. Mentioned, attempted to reach, but all in all impotent. Are you going to have them show up some time in the fic? Before Sweetie Belle looses her magic forever and dies? I mean there is no tragedy tag. But as far as dark goes you've done a good job on making it Psychologically Dark.
*Reads next chapter*