Sweetie Belle is adopted by Applejack, and finds out the hard way how strict, stern, and brutally old fashioned and superstitious the Apple Family really is.
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OOOHHHH SNAP ! Twi needs to try out that Telepathy spell ASAP. And where's Spike in all this? Isn't he in canon the one Twilight goes to when they need to send a letter? After all he was taught that spell by the Princess herself. And The EoH Corruption. That I'll admit is something that I never read about before. Yes, in the Time Loop Trilogy [Hard Reset, Stitch In Time, and Can't Fight Fate], the EoH were different from the Regalia, and the Regalia were psychopathic, homicidal, near omnipotent god objects. That mass murdered entire universes for the sake of harmony. But that they themselves cause Disharmony. That almost sounds like a joke Discord would play.
Well Hot damn. This does explain Apple Jack, and Dashies actions. As well as how Twi's been acting. Although that means that Celestia puposefully made a device that would destroy herself. And in your AU. What happened to make the EoH be brought back to life for well over 20 years. In Canon it was through luck [and Celestia's manipulations / molding] that Twi found out about them, and brought them up. What brought up the need for them here? And why is Celestia not f'd? Since she made them and they corrupt the wielder. Then even as an Immortal Alicorn she wouldn't be beyond the corruption of them [although that'd be a bad ass reason behind Nightmare Moon, but wouldn't explain why Tia didn't go Nightmare Flare.].
Well ... Hot 5h17! So the Apple Family is now going to attack a Pegasi Family, Kidnap a Pegasus Filly, And assault / attempted murder of Twilight. Can AJ get any more screwed. Seriously though Armed with the knowledge that AJ and the others are loosing their ever loving marbles Twi needs to either use their essence to Fix the Problem, becoming the new leader of Equestria [after all that Tia did to cause the near down fall of her society.] Or at least fix the problem that is the Evil EoH. Thus become a hero of Equestria.
Or simply banish those |=u<|<3125 to somewhere where they'll cease to be a problem for a while. Are they like the Dragon Balls and need time to cleanse themselves, or else the become corrupt and Summon Syn/Omega Shenron? Dude ... You have 6 Magic Stones ... Omega Shenron was made when Syn Shenron absorbed the 6 other Dragon Balls. Holly Shiznah! I can't get that out of my head now.
Ok ... So are they like DB GT? Or are they like the Time Loop where they were made with an inherant flaw that makes them evil? Are you going to have a Twilicorn?
Those things being said. So Sweetie is going to have her BAMF Moment. But with how this story is progressing it's looking like any help to get her a magic teacher before she gets permanently injured for life, thus stopping her chances of ever doing magic, is more likly than not [I trust you have a game plan for stuffs] or any competent teacher is going to be long dead. I really hope Twi survives this upcoming assault and gets an insta-message to Celestia. While Tia in this AU looks to be A) Ineffectual on stopping the mass destruction / murder in her own land, and B) Bucking insane in creating the EoH horror show. As Tidbit said. She is bound to put a stop to this.
With how Nimbuscait turned out. I can't see that as working 100% but at least she could put a stop to this instantly. Or we get to see the screw up that this Tia has become. Actually the more I think about it, and the more I read. The more I hope that a different pony, any pony Ascends and just hits the reset button on Equestrian Civilization and the EoH. Because at this point it's a miracle that Discord is unable to be sealed and isn't just laughing his tail off [literally in some cases] at how Celestia has caused more Discord than he could ever hope to achieve.
Seriously though. You have the Rainbow Factory as something that's seen as ok and logical. You have trees being planted by the Apples that are grown to target and murder unicorns. You have the very thing that sealed him away, Corrupt their wielders more thoroughly than he ever could, making them the Elements of Disharmony over time. You have Pegasi who still murder Fk the hell out of the other races. And I believe that one pony mentioned that said that Wendigos were freezing the north. Seriously though that is a level of Chaos and Discord that would make Discord himself J1zz oceans. Literal Oceans. Out of the sky. It's a level of complete Discord that to him would be like a mixture of the Oldest, Rarest of Wines, mixed with an Aphrodisiac, and put on Arnold Schwarzenegger Steroids.
At first I was put off by the Mane 6's actions a little bit. But I followed it because deep down. It was an intriguing story and filled me with the need to see justice done. With a promise that said justice was under way. But now. I want to see Cutie Mark Crusader Alicorn's! And see them just utterly break down Equestria and rebuild it from the ground up. Or well anyone really. Just up and murder the actual Elements, Get rid of Tia, and just redo everything. Since at the moment, almost anything would be better than Celestia and her reign.
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The Elements themselves murdered. Not their bearers which wouldn't hurt them in the long run.
Well fuck. This is getting out hand DX
Hopefully Twilight can find a way to fix this
Wow, I can't wait to see how this mess gets sorted out. Something has to give and when it does, it will be glorious.