Sweetie Belle is adopted by Applejack, and finds out the hard way how strict, stern, and brutally old fashioned and superstitious the Apple Family really is.
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Wow i am speechles, so much feelings right now
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Holly Fsk.
In context to this story Rainbow Dash's actions make sense ... but how in the Hay does Celestia not step in to prevent the Rainbow Factory murder spree? And with Sweetie Belle being seen in town how could she believe the outright lie of Sweetie Belle being dead?
That being said. Apple Jack just lost connection to the Element of Honesty. She's been lying about Rarity, Sweetie Belle, her actions and Racism. With that level of Dishonesty and insanity how is she still the Element of Honesty? I mean even Diamond Tiara would make a better Element of Honesty at this point.
And OMC!!!! What can one Unicorn do. Did she forget that she's Celestia's Protege'? As well as has more power than Starswirl the Bearded? Time to take levels in bad ass and go Super Saiyin!
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I enjoy the story so far, but from what you said. The other comments have been getting under your skin. I like the world you've painted as well as your conversion of basic measurement into the pony equivalent^^
Tell you what, message me and we'll talk about the story. Clearly there is something you feel this story is lacking, and I'll gladly help you find it^^
Ok next stope canterlot palice to talk to celestia cuase this is going to pull in windigos and fast if somethin aint done
This has me feeling rage so great that I desperately wish I could intervene.
But, I know they'll get what's coming.
2950881 Yeah, I was wondering why the hell Celestia didn't nuke the crap out of Nimbuscait, and shoot lightning at every apple pony. PS Rainbow factory is NOT MINE, I merely used it in RD's harsh comments. I should have posted a disclaimer in the authors notes. And like said, that apple cider is really potent, so Applejack got RD drunk already, but i'm sure those 200 bits she slipped her shut her up when she thought about Sweetie Belle later.
I doubt Twilight has free range permission to go start fights. She needs to explain why she can't do that.
2951305 Oh shit...
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Aurora Dawn's fic was awesome [RF and a Pegasus Device [sequel to RF]]. But yeah Celestia really needs to get off her smexy fat flank. Although I think Twilight going Apple Jack threatened to kill me, and sent her ponies off to burn me alive on her property! Oh! and Big Mac saved me I have no idea if he's still alive! Will get Celestia's blood boiling. Hell I don't think she'd go to that Unicorn Division Place first. Since Twilight's first plan of dealing with something is Freak out [did that already], confront it head on [did that and it blew up horribly], Write a letter to the Princess.
I'd almost agree ... but I can see where that'd work with Scoots. But I can see it destroy RD being the Element of Loyalty. Demands that those she's loyal to are upfront with her. She'd look into why Sweetie's still alive, and when that came up. What happened to Rarity since she wasn't the Bitch that AppleJack told her.
Then of course RD regardless of debts wouldn't stand by while she was being manipulated. Would not only throw the money at Apple Jack but would totally destroy her Pegasus style. Since Pegasi are militaristic and don't like being manipulated and used. Especially by their "Friends". And with a freaked out Twilight ready to spill the beans on AJ already. I can see how RD will react when she figures out that she sent Scoots to a paranoid bigot who'd destroy her.
Although I don't know why RD didn't take her to a Doc. Just so she could either confirm it [shudders to think of the wing thing, and why Celestia doesn't just rain hell fire on every pony. Send them back to the dark ages, and start over from scratch. Hell she has a failing system, mass murder, prejudice, and hate [which if you remember is a recipe for Windigos and every conceivable threat to Equestria being summoned since it's friendship that keeps everything safe]. Or it denys it and RD uses that as fodder to further assault Scoots.
Seriously Twi needs to find out why Tia and now Luna are allowing this madness to continue. Rather than blasting it all to hell and making things better. Through blood and death. And tons and tons of fire. [Because Explosiony death is the best].
I hate this story with all my heart you are really sick in the head for the love of god please only write one more chapter with sweetie belle killing applejack and end this monstrosity
DISLIKE!!!
2968731 i love you too. i have to make this thing make sense before i can finish it. dont worry SB's been through the worst of it.
2979323 don't worry she gets her revenge, i'm just trying to line it all up
Reading the part where Twilight argued with AJ made me think all the time something like: You're a magically talented unicorn, Twily! You are superior to that evil mudpony bitch! Unleash the darkest kinds of magic on her; dark magic that even would put King Sombra to shame and spread chaos and havoc on that so-called "farm"! Then take SB, AB and SC with you and to safety!