Diamond Tiara is not all that she appears to be. Being a bully may just be a cover for how she really feels. The painful feeling of not being able to be herself and only a sketchbook knows the true her.
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Y'know what, I'm gonna follow this story as it's a very interesting concept. The idea that Diamond Tiara is hiding a massive amount of insecurity about her desired special talent--to the point she's lying about her own cutie mark and blank flanked-ness--really has a lot of mileage in it, and I'd love to see where you take it. The only thing is, I'd suggest getting a pre-reader, as I noticed a fair few omitted commas, periods, spaces and some formatting issues. But do keep up the good work!
Do go on. I implore you.
Interesting concept. Please continue!
I love your concept and ideas. Keep writing, I want to hear more
This is something I haven't seen before. Well done, too. I hope you continue writing.
This kinda felt like a cop out chapter.
Like, here. A bunch of stuff resolved.
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honestly i felt like i was dragging it on too long XD
but i added a little more, tell me if its any better.
Looks like you're trying to ship Applebloom and Diamond Tiara together as well as show a different side to Diamond. At the very least, friendshipping.
This story need more comments. Well now there a new one.
well I would have rather Diamond be more trusting of Silver Spoon with her secret but otherwise this a compelling look into Diamond's psyche and motivations. I love Diamond as a troubled artist.