There are legends in Equestria, about great creatures who once lived among us. They shared their technology brought pony civilization to its highest zenith. But, those are just legends, told so many times that every version sounds exactly the same.
I know you don't believe me. It's because I made you that way.
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Got a double space there.
Remember italics are cool too! Of the Roots.
And I'm not sure you want the The capitalized there (like it is in the quote).
Those double spaces man.
Other than that, cool story man!
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This story has been reviewed by The Equestrian Critics Society
Story Title: The Past Is No More Than a Present Memory
Author:Datalon
Reviewed by: Blankscape
Little to no rules exist when writing any fan fiction long as the author keeps things reasonable, original, and above all, interesting. However, Datalon’s story, while somewhat reasonable, succeeds more at being trite and unsophisticated than original, and barely comes up to half of entertaining. Its errata overcast its promising premise as he attempts to condense a very long plotline into such a short span of three thousand words.
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Score: 4/10