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RainbowBob
Are you ready, kids? Also a thingy so my pizza funds don't run out anytime soon.
RainbowBob
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Time to celebrate over a bottle of my finest whiskey.
I don't usually read straight-up clop... But I'll make an exception just this once.
motherfucker. tell me this right now.
WHERE is that pic from, and WHO made it?
Noice job nigga.
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It says in the description, but here it is again http://phnkytown.tumblr.com.
Was pretty good for just straight up clop. I noticed a few spelling mistakes and missed words during the clop scenes, but it didn't really detract from the story quality.
One thing that does bother me is that two different explanations for the bet were given. The first, told before he even gets to the tattoo parlour, is that the bet was about how many shots of vodka he could drink. The second, told to Rarity after the anal sex, is that the bet was whether or not he would hit on a girl. This is just a little bit confusing
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Whoops, thanks for pointing that out. Wrote this all up at 2:00 am last night, so I was a little bonkers.
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I agree whole heartedly with you.
It was really good
I MEAN IT
Next time: Pinkie Pie gets a labia piercing.
That cover pic! Dat ass! *passes out with highly pressurized anime nose bleed*
i was like "did this nigga really just use 'booty' in a serious description sentence or....wait why is his di- oh. Ohhhhh. This is a clopfic. *clicks back button* Yep, sex tag. Why didn't I notice that before."
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Heh, no worries, I figured it was just a silly error.
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Hey, I'm famous for being silly and whacky in my stories. Doesn't mean my clop stories can't include that too.
Dirty talk was definitely the best part. Not a fan of what an empty character Danny is, but still a fun, sexy romp.
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In the future I intend to build up the characterization of the characters more, but this was more of a practice of whether I can actually write erotica. Stick around and I'm sure you won't be disappointed, as I have many other stories to write.
You should write more humanized. It's a genre that sorely lacking in good writers and frankly, I think you could pull it off well without clop, amigo. I mean, I'd read the hell out of a humanized adventure fic.
Not that this was bad. It fits my requirement for good clop: Not gross/weird, and humanized. Only thing that'd make it better be girl-girl. But that's just opinion showing.
Nice job, Bob
unf
2566951 Well... I doubt this can be labelled as clop since both of them are human
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i thought you werent publishing this yet?
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Got it all checked out today.
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Humanized is still clop I believe. Or something. I dunno.
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I take that as a cry of passion from the erotica.
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True dat.
My smaller brother was flying around the room, but that didn't keep me away from finishing this
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Indeed
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ALL ABOARD YA LITTLE BUCCANEERS
Rarity as a Yakuza's wife... ooooooh god yes...
2567319 i think it was nice to that you showed rarity's generosity in the end and i just loved her teasing personality
great job with this! keep up the good work!
My First Tatoo
Grammar score out of 10: 9
Pros:
Loved the believable characters.
The story flowed excellently
It had humor to it, which I like
Cons:
I Only have 1, and that's the few grammar issues there are. "Why you ask?" Instead of "Why do you ask" small stuff that could go without the fix but I just felt that it made a bit more sense
Notes Section
Keep doing what you're doing, it's excellent!
Fuck
Oh, that picture is sooooo sexy. It's a respectable clop, if predictable and riddled with spelling and grammar errors. It was a decent read, even if Anon came far too much in too short a time to be believable. Interesting, but rather forgettable.
2567079 thank you sir. i am very impatient.
This was a pretty damn hot clop!
Boy, I don't think Danny will be needing Cialis anytime soon, though... 
Found two mistakes though:
*Viper's
*Clitoris
Overall, awesome job for a first clop, my friend!
2568026 Indeed
Dat cover art, amirite?
(Insert story here) and then they fucked. 9/10 for no awkward ending.
Grammar problems, a few of them. Tiny ones. Negligible.
Simple little slice of life story, not all that bad of a premise, and Rarity's in-character. Hot lovin' is hot. Not too descriptive, not too concise. You seem to know what you're doing, sir.
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Fixed the worst of the grammar stuff, and thanks for the feedback! This is more of a test to see if I can actually pull clop off. You can be sure to see more stuff from me in the future in much better quality.
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Thank you for that. Glad you enjoyed it!
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Wow, thanks Bad! That means a ton coming from you! Have all my love and mustaches!
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Only the sexiest. If you look through the tumblr page, you can see more examples of this art, which I'll be sure to make even more stories of!
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Yay, love and mustaches!
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YES
I... Kinda wanted to see Daniel and Rarity show up to hang out with his friends. That would've been funny. Go out for tattoo, bring back the tattoo artist.
2569080 ikr? i was so waiting for either another customer or an employee to come in right in the middle of it
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I don't wanna be a bother to you, you're probably busy writing. BUT.
Pony Grand Tour. Look it up, read it, leave a comment, tell me what you thought. Maybe you'll like it enough to fave.
>Rarity
>Humanized
>Clop
Great googily moogily!
I think my prick is broken. The boner just won't go away. haha
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"humanized adventure"
Ahem
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). Also, glad you enjoyed it! 
Hey, I might just try out some humanized adventure stuff in the future (with some clop on the side
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Just gotta flaunt it off, huh? 
Yes Dennis, we all know about your story.
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Of course dahling. I have to shamelessly advertise my stori—
BANG
/dead
2569782
If you show me yours, than I'll show you mine.
Because dong innuendos when I'm talking about fanfics are classy, amirite?
Though, seriously, I have read the first couple of chapters of Lyra. Not too shabby so far--I just gotta man up and get some time to actually read. Then again, you have a metric ton of people already enamored with it, so I guess you don't need me telling you I like it.
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Edit: good on you, man. It's always nice having another humanized writer in the corner. I've been trying to make it my crusade to write stories showing people human fics don't have to be just clop/wish fulfillment/2nd person school stories. They can be just as effective as any other tale. Having a guy I can point people to for good stuff's always nice, haha.
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Oh my god we could start our own PonyFall series it'll be amazing yes