What happens when you wish on an exploding star? You get your wish that's what! But what happens after a guy wishes himself off to Equestria and gets stuck there? How does one human effect the fate and future of all of Equestira. He shall reveal not only Discords orgain but how Celestia and Luna both came to power. His future is not a bright one but for the sake of all of the ponies he has to fight many foes, some of them old friends.
Oh yeah and some human-Rainbow shipping got to have that somewhere am I right? You have been warned!
Chapters (2)
Fuck you and your xenophilia
2490235 Why? I put a warning if you didn't want to read it then don't. Oh yeah and
you can't stop me.
Oh...
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2490483 That is the first time I've seen that
very nice.
Fecal matter is going to impact upon the rotary cooling device
2492689 Wait I was wrong this makes nine comments from you!
So much story to write so little time.
All right, I guess I have to do this by myself, this fic rappresent the most bland idea for a hie, I've read likely, tons of this stories, the guy go to equestria, makes friends istantly with the mane six, and he even cummed in Rainbow Dash, all of this without even in a day there(or a chapter), tipical Gary Stu in other word.
At least there's something interesting, the three whishes and the prank to to pinkie pie (probably the reaction was right, but an alien pranked her, maybe a bit of panic in the city was a nice way to make the situation interesting..) BUT the rest is something I have already seen.
4/10
Try to not fall in other cliché (like the various things I have pointed), oblyviously its not an easy thing to trip in them, but with a bit of trought about the story, before starting writing it, can help a bit, making the story more interesting, and not predictable, this kind of fics in general, are already frowned upon, if it became a noious story, that treat an overused argoument, it will not keep peoples interested, making a story, die.
Obliviously, IMHO.
2501502 How could you think to judge an entire story from only it's first chapter? If you read my other work you should know that I have a-lot more up my sleeve then that. Yeah I guess your kinda right about the cliché but with over a thousand stories being written with the same topic it's kinda inevitable to not run into two or three. But you got to trust me on this I still have some cards left to play you've only seen the introduction. Come back for chapter two and then tell me what you think.
2501502 I totally agree with you but I want to give this fic a chance because it seems like there is more to the plot than the regular run of the mill rainbow dash x human fic. Especially because this human is gonna have to answer why he is still there in the morning. It was only supposed to be for one day.
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Don't worry, i'll keep an eye here :)
I am quite happy, you received my critics without any problem.
Ps: didnt noticed that other story, maybe I will read it later.
2504886 Thank you. As for the critics I love comments of all kinds so they are all read and appreciated, I view them as something to either motivate me or help me get better.
Used 2 wishes and had sex, all in the first chapter.
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I like the story now but it seems like its going to be short.
But congrats, have a like and fav.
2506492 Thank you but I got a few cards up my sleeve. So, you can expect at least a solid five chapters maybe more if I decide to head the story off with a couple of twists which I am prone to doing. It could just as easily be ten chapters. I'm not completely sure yet I have the basic plotline down, but right now I'm in the stage of development where I get to throw all the fun bits in.
very nice
2507056 Thank you
All in all, a good read. Needs more punctuation.
just saying. Good story. Favorite. But sex on first chapter? All I have to say is this.mylittlefacewhen.com/f/9301/
You have more comedic potential leaving him a dash clone. I did what with who?
This is good this fucking good!
had to read it again for the hilarity.
I love the story and could only see one mistake:
the first here should be hear.
2557844 Yeah I thought so too and you're going to have to explain the question
Also thank you for the favorite!
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That is what happens if you get the wrong dash at the right time... I did what with who? I mean friends with benefits has already been achieved.
2557907 Thank you!
I try my best.
2558772 Thank you Just fixed it.
2559179Your welcome, just glad to help.
OH, and I think we should keep the fake dash
2559691 Oh definitely keeping her/him. We got to double the Rainbows.
I think the princess should change the fake dash. I'm saying turning him human but maybe change him into like a stallion, I don't know, up to you
2566791 I love them.
2569972 Thank you for the input.
I've come to a decision and I just hope everyone will like it.
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After I finish my finals I will hunt you down and make you walk barefooted across Legos while Justin Bieber plays at 125 decibels
2571182 That is only if you can stop hanging off the cliffs I'm making.
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He can borrow my jetpack!
Thanks Pinkie! *Puts on shades and straps on jetpack*
2579149 *You fly up into A pink cotton candy cloud and get stuck*
It's good to be king*High fives Discord*
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*eats cloud* You forget, I'm a growing boy with a metabolism faster than Rainbow Dash. *Throws bowling ball at Discord, knocking him out* And I've leaned the art of, Being Pinkie. I NOW HAVE THE POWERS OF PINKIE PIKE! *High hoof/fives Pinkie*
Have fun author person! *Waves and bounces off*
2580932 Hmm... It's seems I have underestimated my enemy. No matter I have studied under the all powerful Princess Trollestia *Reaches for lever and pulls it as soon as you bounce onto it* Now go think about this... *trap door opens underneath you causing you to fall into a rising cannon barrel* On the MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON
*(insert load cannon noise here) You get shot to the moon where your only company is two astronauts, and Screwball; all of whom are riding a moon rover, and carrying a large nerf gun arsenal. They begin to attack you with the nerf guns, who's darts go farther and faster in the lower gravity and no atmosphere.* 
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*I appear behind you* You forget, *I start tickling you* I have Pinkie logic on my side!
Wait. If Robert is a guy, John is a guy, and they are ganna have a threesome with Rainbowdash, doesn't that make them gay?
2668481 I just spent 20 minutes trying to think of a response to your comment that would explain everything and I still have nothing... Congrats you have stumped me
Keep up the good work man. Remember; people like to read about good persons being regarded as evil.
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Answer: No. Robert is no longer a guy. If he transforms into Rainbow Dash, he will be only a girl. Therefore, there is no gayness unless Robert decides he wants to pull a "Rule 63" in the middle of it. Then it's okay if Robert and John ignore each other and go after RD.
Also, I'm thinking that Robert should be Surprise. That would be very interesting...
DUDE, JUST. MANN, this story is allready 20% COOLER!!!!
I LOVE IT!!
Almost 2 years without an update? Yeah; This one's pretty much done.....
John....
and
Robert....
So....
the fake Rainbow was a wolf?