• Published 13th Apr 2013
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The Marvelous Misadventures of Shining Armor and the CMC - lrft4_san



Shining Armor is accidently turned into a little filly.

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Epilogue

“Gleaming Shield - I mean - Shining Armor,” Sweetie Belle said, once again taking on the position of master of ceremonies. “The Cutie Mark Crusaders would like to thank you for your dedication to helping us in our attempts to get our cutie marks.”

Shining Armor stood before the girls, an amused look on his face. They’re being awfully formal about this, he thought with a chuckle.

The scene was surprisingly ritualistic, with the Cutie Mark Crusaders seated in front of their treehouse, a small pyre, burning next to them, with a very confused looking Applejack on standby in case the fire needed to be put out. Pinkie Pie (who Shining Armor was surprised to find out knew about him being Gleaming Shield since day one), had come with the rest of their friends, and decorated the clearing with red and gold streamers and balloons.

“What the hay is going on here?” He heard Rainbow Dash ask Twilight.

“It’s a very long story,” Twilight said.

Shining Armor ignored the sudden laughs that erupted from their direction as his sister quickly summarized the past week’s events, and gave the Crusaders an exaggerated bow, which made the young fillies giggle.

“You are very welcome,” he said.

“Now,” Apple Bloom, continued for her friend, “if you would please present your cape.”

Cape? For a second Shining Armor had forgotten the had been gifted an identical cape to those currently being worn by the Crusaders.

“Oh, uh, just a second.” With a quick spell, he transported himself to his room in Golden Oaks Library, and grabbed the cape, which he’d folded, and placed in one of his suitcases, before poofing back to the clearing. “Here you are.”

Apple Bloom took the cape, and trotted back to her spot.

“When you first arrived here, we gave this to you to show that you were a member of the Cutie Mark Crusaders, and now that you have your cutie mark, we would like to present you with this.”

Right on cue, Scootaloo brought forth a new cape. She unfolded it for Shining Armor to show that it bore his cutie mark. She attempted to put it on Shining Armor’s shoulders, but found it difficult now that he was much taller than she was.

“Princess Celestia, would you please do the honor?” She asked.

The princess smiled, as she lifted the cape in her magic, and secured it around Shining Armor’s neck.

“So, what does this mean?” Shining Armor asked, still a little hazy on the details of the ceremony.

“It means that even though you’ve got your Cutie Mark, you’re still a Crusader,” Apple Bloom explained.

“Which means we won’t need this one anymore,” Sweetie Belle said, taking the old cape, and holding it over the fire.

“NOOOOOOO!” Came a shriek from behind.

“Rarity, this is one of the new ones that doesn’t have your precious gold fabric sewn into it.”

“Oh, well,” said Rarity, embarrassedly. “Still, it would be best to save it darling; you never know when you might need another one.”

“Fine,” Sweetie Belle said, taking the cape away from the fire.

“And with that,” Apple Bloom went on, “your graduation is complete.”

The fillies cheered, and hugged Shining Armor in turn, congratulating him on achieving his cutie mark.

“Thank you all,” he said, “although, technically I earned my cutie mark years ago, it was still an honor joining you for a week.”

“Just promise us you’ll keep in touch,” Apple Bloom said.

“Of course I will.”

“And that you’ll come back to visit us,” added Sweetie Belle.

“Whenever I can.”

“And that you’ll give us ideas for things we can do to try to get our cutie marks,” finished Scootaloo.

“As long as they’re safe, you’ve got it.”

“Well then, I guess there’s just one last thing to do. Pinkie?”

From out of nowhere, Pinkie Pie produced a record player.

“Let’s paaaartay!” She shouted.

As the music began to play, everypony got up, and began dancing, except for Shining Armor, who settled down in the grass next to his wife. Cadence wrapped a wing around her husband, and nestled against him, the two content in watching the others enjoy themselves while they rested for a while.

“It’s good to have you back, sweetie,” Cadence said, planting a kiss on her husband’s lips.

“It’s good to be back,” Shining Armor sighed, as he leaned against Cadence. For a while they just lay there, enjoying each other’s company, not saying anything. Shining Armor watched the Crusaders; Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo dancing with Rarity and Rainbow Dash, and Apple Bloom begrudgingly giving Applejack a small satchel which he assumed was the bits that she lost in the bet. “I want a foal.”

It felt like somepony had bucked him in the gut; he hadn’t expected the words to escape his mouth. But as the words sank in, the more he realized that it was exactly what he wanted.

“I want a foal,” he repeated, giving his wife a warm smile.

Cadence just giggled, and gave Shining Armor a peck on the cheek.

“About that,” she said in a low voice so nopony else could hear, “remember how I said that there was something that I wanted to tell you?”

“Yeah…” Shining Armor’s eyes went wide with realization. He wanted to kick himself; how hadn’t he seen it before. The signs were there; the morning sickness, the weird food cravings, they all pointed to one thing. “Cadence, are you…”

“Yes, I am,” she said.

Shining Armor was torn between fainting out of surprise, and elatedly jumping in the air in celebration. Instead of either, his body settled for chuckling nervously.

“Of course,” he said. “I can’t believe I didn’t notice.”

“It’s understandable,” Cadence said, scooching closer to her husband, “we’ve both been so busy trying to resettle the Crystal Empire, and preparing for the Equestria Games. If I hadn’t gone to the doctor, I probably wouldn’t have known myself until the games were over, and I had a little more time to concentrate on our life.”

Shining Armor stared at his wife, dumbstruck, and then a smile spread across his face. Wow, he thought, as he leaned in for another kiss, I’m going to be a father. It was almost hard to believe that in one day he had gone from being a foal, to being the expected father of one. Both ideas were equally nerve wracking, and exciting.

“It’s too bad you had to change back though,” Cadence joked. “If you were still a filly, I could have used you to practice on.”

“Please don’t get any weird ideas,” Shining Armor groaned. “One week as a filly was long enough.” Still, he couldn’t help but think that what he had learned from his time with the Crusaders, or his experiences with Snails and Diamond Tiara, could be useful in the future.

“So what do we do now?” He continued. “Should we tell everyone? I’m sure Twilight would love to hear that she’s going to be an aunt.”

Cadence just shook her head.

“I think you revealing your true identity was enough excitement for the day. Also, I don’t think Twilight would hear anything that you have to say at the moment.” She gestured with her head towards Twilight, and Shining Armor looked to see his sister also hunkered down near Princess Celestia, sound asleep despite the ruckus that was happening just a short distance away. “Let’s wait until after the Equestria Games to tell everyone. That way we have enough time to get our lives on track first.”

Shining Armor nodded his agreement.

“I love you,” he said.

“I love you, too, my wonderful prince.”

“Hey, Shining Armor, Cadence,” Sweetie Belle called over the music, “come dance with us.”

“What do you think, sweetie,” Shining Armor said, rising from the ground, and extending a hoof to Cadence, “care to dance?”

“It would be my honor,” Cadence said, taking her husband’s hoof in hers, allowing him to pull her up, “Gleaming Shield.”

Shining Armor rolled his eyes, but grinned widely, as he and Cadence joined the others. He closed his eyes, thankful for his new friends, for his time as being a filly finally ending, and for his journey into fatherhood about to begin. With one last smile, and a whispered “I love you” to his wife, he, Cadence, and the Cutie Mark Crusaders, danced well into the night.

Comments ( 39 )

Huh.
Not only was that a great way to end the story, you managed to fully justify in series why there was such a short period of time between the announcement of Cadence' pregnancy and the arrival of Flurry Heart. Nice.

7876962 Heh, thanks. Not going to lie, but the show kinda screwed me over with that little addition lol. I'm glad you enjoyed the end.

Well, that was a fun ride, but alas, all things must end. Good job.

This was adorable.

Complete is it. Now I have to read more than three chapters.

Huzzah a wunderfull ending!

Logicking Flurry Heart into the story and the FIM series as a whole. I don't think I've seen anyone do it before, so props for that.

well this was a good ride

I was hoping that Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon would get some comeuppance.

Adorable ending.:D Nicely done.^^

Epllogue? More like ADORABPLOGUE

I'm sad that it's over, but this was a lovely ending. Dance party and everything. ^^

*sigh*

Another great story read in less than 24 hours, counting sleep. Oh well, this was a good, short, cute story.

A fitting conclusion to a heartwarming and funny story.

I love a happy ending!

Its good to see this story been finished :twilightsmile: .

I started reading without much spectation, but in the end this became one of my favorite fics :rainbowkiss: . Good Job :yay: .

Good story, needs a sequel.

7889276 They're small hamburgers.

Cute ending, keep writing new stories, please!

Quite the fun story. Well done!

This was a very good story +fav five stars IMO.

LOVED this story! So cute, fuzzy, hilarious and all around awesome! :pinkiehappy:

7921212 Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

7922626 You are very welcome. Thank you for enjoying it.

Comment posted by T-bone deleted Jul 26th, 2017

Dang, I remember when I started reading this story back in mid 2014, and now it's 2017 and I've finally gotten around to reading the last chapter. I really like how you tied it all up. Gave me a bunch of warm fuzzy feelings.

I still remember a few scenes pretty well, especially the CMC cops with Sweetie Belle being the siren. That image was too stupidly sweet for me that it's been engraved on my brain.

Bet it's a huge load off now that the story is complete.

Thanks for the entertaining read.:twilightsmile:

What a great story. I kinda wish it was canon I think this experience would help him a lot in raising Flurry Heart.

Not many stories like this, it was very funny and I liked it

What a great story Im glad how everything worked out in end for everybody and to find Cadance was pregnant and not a changeling in disguise! I really wish it was canon What Shining Armor experience d and learned could help him alot in raising Flurry Heart!

I have to say, this was an excellent story. One of the best i've read recently, to be sure. Thus it's going into my All Time Greats folder. With your bonus points, this masterpiece earns you a 12 on the :yay:itude meter!

Oh. and also, it had lots of...

I am still holding out and hoping for a sequel to this wonderful story! :twilightsmile:

Re-reading this reminded me how much I enjoyed this story.

Here's hoping for a sequel! :twilightsmile:

I know you might not, but can you make a story where Flurry Heart wants a friend and Shining got Twilight to turn him into Gleaming?

and for his journey into fatherhood was about to begin.

Definitely a nice read.

Kept me hooked! I'm so glad this one didn't end up dark despite the elongated publication period. It suffers from somewhere between five to ten glaring grammatical errors that broke my total immersion, but the story feels like it could be a period episode if only a it had a friendship report/journal entry. When you tell a lie, you get to live it; don't slip up. Good going, Cadence on that one! I'd bet she talked Luna into turning a blind mind's eye towards little Shield's nightmares if only I could see Luna going along with it, which I sadly can't.

I find it hard to choose a favorite part. I enjoy the cute embarrassment scenes, but I also love the ones where Shining excels at mentoring the CMC. I'm also a fan of the collapsing secret trope you pulled off pretty well.

This tale got me wondering though:

  • What would the CMC from On a Cross and Arrow inadvertently do to inwardly embarrass that world's Gleaming Shield as she romps around as Shining Armor?

Awesome story, wish there was just a bit more. +5 Internet points for calls to continuity (though Twilight's "three years" in Ponyville early on were later canonically stated to be one).

Been meaning to read this for a while. What a nice story! I love fun, out there concepts like this.

That was a good story.

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