Ditzy always loves traveling with the Doctor and even though they find danger everywhere they go, she still continues to cling to him and his adventures. But what happens when they crashland in an alternate universe? What happens when she meets this versions Doctor? What happens when the Doctor looks at himself and sees his dark reflection?
Based off the Character from the Zerum Whooves Tumblr by Jitters.
Good. Give us more.
This... this is going to be a good story
The only thing is, the're a few grammatical errors throughout your story. You should read it over a couple times yourself and find out how many.
2413276 ok no problem. And thanks.
Except for the grammatical errors at the beginning it's pretty good. I shall follow this story and see where it goes.
MORE MUST HAVE MORE !!!!!!!!!!!
Oh and plz make the chapters longer
2418227 I can do that but it will take me alot longer to release them. I have a very busy life. But I will do my best.
Take as long as nessicary that will keep me in suspense which will pique my interest in this story
Oh. If you find or know of any other dicorded/ zerum whooves plz tell me the name of the story I kinda like the Doctors dark side its kinda sexy
2433042 Sure. though I have yet to find any good ones myself. Try Darkness meets Choas. That involves discorded whooves at his best and worst.
K thanks I'll look it up
Oh my gosh. DISCORD KILLED DERPY!?! Now the power of discorded doctore versus zerum and discord
DERPY! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
you will be forever missed
d-derpy?
oh,now youve done it dip-cord!
WHY?!
alright discord prepare for a hard core magical beating!!!!!!!!
I'M GONNA BEAT THE SHIT OUTTA YOU FOR KILLING DERPY !!!!!!!!!! YOU FILTHY ASSHOLE!!!!!!!! BITCH IM GONNA KICK YOUR ASS SOOOO HARD MOTHAFUCKA
sorry bout tht its jus I love derpy so much
WHY DERPY WHYYYY
But I do like the twist it took here have some moustaches
Just make sure you bring Derpy back or I will hunt you down and kill you
2471567 I just want you to know that I have complete respect for Derpy. I am afraid that as for her coming back from that well...You'll just have to read on and see what happens.
Ok
Just make sure that Derpys Doctor beats the living shit outta Zerum. That motherfucker Discord is a God damn retard for killing Derpy. Cause now he's screwed too.
2478866 Oh don't worry there will be an epic fight.
YES
Oh and I apoligize for all the cursing I'm not usually like that
I don't know what came over me its just I love Derpy s-so much
YES
Oh and I apoligize for all the cursing I'm not usually like that
I don't know what came over me its just I love Derpy s-so much
2481308 Thats alright, did the same thing after reading Rainbow Factory for the first time. Also should have the next chapter out soon. My goal is this weekend.
Yay I look forward to it
Dissy gonna kick your flank bro!
Wait is this Valey or Dissy?
2491106 Dissy
2492590 okay, great chapter by the way.
2495105 thanks
DERPYS OKAY
2497119 It's strange really. I've killed characters before in my other stories, really bad ways to go as well, yet when it came to Derpy...Well I knew I soon as I killed her off I had to figure out a way to bring her back. Then I watched Lets Kill Hitler and I just said Perfect and went with that.
I love u I luv u i luv u
I luv tht episode it was AWSOME
Half of the time I was reading this I was saying, "I love this!" Over and over again. It's just so... I can't explain it! It mixes Zerum, Discord, The Doctor, AND Ditzy! I'm sorry but its SO SO GOOD! KEEP IT UP!!
2522982 Wow thanks for the complement!
wow. LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!
2621486 Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.
Doctor says:I will beat the living tar out of you.
????? Says:won't have to.
(drepy's daughter comes out of the shadows in a sheplon tank)
Daughter:die,discord,die!
Discord:ya,you and what army?
Brony:this one.
(10,000 bronys step from shadows holding various weapons from different points in time)
Bronys:die!!!
2659236 Nice.
you should do more Doctor and Derpy stories your very good at it
2713152 I have been considering doing another Doctor Whooves story for some time now. I am currently working on two different stories but perhaps maybe sometime in early August there may be another Doctor Whooves story coming out by then. Stay tuned.
YES. all the yes.
2930377 Glad you enjoyed it. Be sure, when you get the chance, to check out KH: Road to Twilight. I really enjoy getting feed back.
Oh my gosh! That was amazing! Awesome! Great job!
3431946 Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.
Jitterbugjive specifically said that they didn't want zerum to be used for anything but their blog, did they not?
6699335 That's news to me. At the time that I wrote it, I remember asking around if it would be ok to write something Zerum related and people telling me that Jitters would not mind over and over again. Since then I have made it my mission to get permission from the authors themselves though at this point in time I unfortunately did not take the time to do so. My only defense is that those that I asked said it would be alright and the ones that I asked were working on Doctor Whooves related material at the time. Though it would be a act of Luna if any of them remember me or me remembering who I asked.