When there is trouble in Lyra and Bon Bon's relationship, hijinks occur.
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Finally a normal story!
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What, where?
3290744 EVERYWHERE! Even you're normal! But what is normal? We will never know. This could be normal to me or maybe it's not. Normal is a very confused word to some ppl.
Now this... i love it.
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Awesome!
Have a cookie~ *Hands you a strawberry and rosemary scone*
3291119 Flames- Thanks.
(Accepts the one) you are so kind.
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Its just one scone. They're delicious, I make them sometimes irl. They even have a lemon glaze.
3291130 Flames- fixed! Hmm.
Cool POV. "Cinematic Narrative Omniscient," I think I'd call it. Also, I didn't see the obvious quality shift, so congratulations there.
For the love of scones, don't ever stop writing in whatever magical style you're writing in!
All scone related nonsense aside, I loved this! The narrator is fantastic, and I loved what you managed to do with the characters in such a small scene. Sorry for not providing any actual advice, I can barely anything readable anyway :P
I always love a good Lyra & Bonbon story. Gonna be interesting to see where this goes
I look forward to seeing how this plays out
I like the narration (of course), I like the characterization, I like the dialog. I especially like how this appears as though it may be something of a deconstruction of the whole Lyra and Bon Bon relationship where one of them is crazy and the other is always exasperated. I love deconstructions, especially of fanon concepts. I look forward to more.