One day in Fanner city, Vash the Stampede is held at gun point, then knocked unconsious. He awakes to find himself in a grassy field as a pony. He decides to seek help from Twilight Sparkle so they can figure out why he was in Equestria and how he got there. Follow Vash as he tries to get home, while trying to hide his seemingly dangerous self from the rest of the ponies in this crossover between Trigun and My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic.
Rated T for the mention of Alcohol, and some violent themes, as well as some harsh language. I usually try to make the stories for everyone, but that obviously can't happen with something like Trigun...
Cover art made by DarkIllusion1
Link to cover art:
Sixty Billion Double Dollar Pony
Chapters (2)
A Trigun/MLP X-over... this could be interesting!
Needs Nicholas Wolfwood
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I still haven't worked that out, I was actually planning to have some chapters start off with more Trigun characters becoming ponies as well, I definitely can't skip Wolfwood though, seeing as how he was my second favorite character from the show, the first being Vash.
2400200 I cried when Nicholas died... Yes, bring him in!
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I didn't really cry, though I was pretty dang close to that! When I start on chapter 2, you can count on him being in there! (Good thing I didn't start yet, I was gonna have Meryl and Millie come in first...)
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They are gonna come right?
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Yes, don't worry, all the beloved characters of Trigun will be in here, whether it's a small cameo, or a huge role. If there's any smaller role characters you'd like me to add, and I'll try to add them as best as I can!
OMG Make more please :D! I loved it :D
Lol, I remember watchin Trigun a few years back.... im followin.
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Yes, it is a very well made show, I just felt it was necessary to combine Trigun, my favorite anime, with MLP, my favorite on air american televised cartoon.
that should be either humans or humankind, something along those lines
excessive spacing
unnecessary capital letter
Why do Twilight know about humans?
Why she's so calm when he tols about killing 200 thousands of people even if it was an accident?
OOC/Rushed.
Chapter 1 diagnosis: needs polishing, lots and lost of polishing. and maybe a proofreader.
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Try to refrain from making spelling errors when correcting someone else.
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Don't worry, the next chapter got a bit more polish when it was posted.
Da heck is this?
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Are you looking for an answer or are you being sarcastic? Because I can go with both. I just don't know how I should respond to your question. I would be happy to answer you though!
2469535How is my sentence sarcastic?
And I'm genuinely curious as to what the heck you have written.
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Oh sorry, I'm not trying to sound like a dick, it's hard not to on the internet as you can't really word things with personality, but it says in the description it's a crossover between MLP and Trigun. That's why I thought you were being sarcastic, because I thought you were asking what this was about.
Basically I am bringing Trigun characters into the world of MLP, as it is my favorite anime, I felt it necessary, especially since I haven't seen a crossover between the two yet. Vash wakes up as a pony, thinking it was all a joke, then learns how... wait, why am I telling you? You have the first two chapters at your disposal... again, I'm not trying to be a dick, I'm just not good with wording things in an internet conversation/reply, I'm only trying to entertain. That's basically my only social goal is entertainment, sort of like Pinkie Pie, yet not as bombastic...
2469684Yeah, I knew what it was a crossover with, I just have no idea what Trigun is.
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An anime about Vash the Stampede, a man who would never hurt a fly. After stopping his brother, Millions Knives, from destroying all of the human race, he takes his gun which he made special. The gun has this thing where it opens up, turns the users arm into a giant laser, then destroys anything in a certain radius. Vash goes to find a priest who knew his surrogate mother, Rem Sovereign, and finds his brother there with the preacher dead. He proceeds to activate the gun's ability and it destroys half of the city, resulting in half a million people dying at his hands, this also earns him a bounty of Sixty Billion Double Dollars. The show from there follows Vash, who is a pacifist mind you, as he escapes capture almost every episode, meeting up with Nicholas D. Wolfwood, a fallen preacher who carries around a huge cross that is filled with guns. In episode 1 he meets up with Meryl Strife and Millie Thompson of the Bernardelli Insurance Company, who are tasked with following him to make sure he doesn't cause anymore damage. Around episode 14 or 15, his brother sends 5 of the most ruthless killers on the planet to hunt down and kill Vash which is when the series goes from light hearted comedy with action, to a dark, more serious plot with more emphasis on action.
That's basically the whole plot without any spoilers in it, it's a really good show, I highly recommend it.
2469737Sounds very interesting.
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It is, I would suggest the english dub as Johnny Yong Bosch's mannerisms as Vash are great, he perfectly portrays the character through his voice acting, plus I prefer dubs, not saying that subs aren't better, it's just a matter of opinion.
2469810I prefer dubs as well. Though there is one anime where I absolutely refuse to watch the dubs. That anime would be 'Karin'. (a.k.a. Chibi Vampire for those who read the manga) I have listened to both dub and sub of that anime, and I can tell you right now: The English version of Karin's voice is absolute murder on the ears. It sounds like Britney Spears hopped up on crack while slowly murdering a cat. I don't care if I have to read subtitles, that voice almost literally makes my ears bleed.
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That's how I feel with Ganta's english voice in Deadman Wonderland, it's just SOOOO annoying during any tense moment, any time when he isn't in a fight or something cool happens, it's fine, but as soon as something good DOES happen it's horribly bad, it's the only anime I prefer to watch a sub of
2469961But as you said, he's good to listen to when not in combat or anything serious. Karin is an anime where a vampiric teenage girl gets found out by a teenage guy, he keeps her secret, they fall in love (eventually), and she cries out to him a lot. It hurts my ears just listening to her talk normally. If I were to hear her talk in ANY way besides normal speaking, my ears would metaphorically explode.
I love this
I really liked trigun when it was out and Im re watching it so im going to watch out for more of this
Keep up the good work and cant wait for more
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Thank you! It always lifts my spirit when I bring joy to someone! As for Trigun, it is my favorite anime, and I felt that it was necessary to do this, I will definitely be writing more, so keep an eye out!
2483243Your welcome and thank you man
I thought you were referencing Colgate.
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Yeah... I put an author's note about that, I always saw Lyra as a light blue, after I wrote this story I was told she's a mint green but I always saw her as a light blue. I guess I'm slightly color blind...
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The moment he explained his backstory I lost interest. That really doesn't seem like something he would just go and talk about.
3592160 'He' as in Vash? From my point of view I always saw Vash as a very open guy, I mean, it's almost gotten him killed multiple times, so it's actually pretty plausible he would open himself up like that. Example of him almost dying from being either too open or too trusting would be like in episode 2 when he pretty much just trusts the mayor of the dying town and *SPOILER* almost gets himself, Meryl, and Millie (And whats her face with the breasts) killed from him not only trusting the mayor, but outright trying to protect him. Or in the episode in which Vash faces the samurai guy named *insert name here* as part of the Gung-Ho Guns, he knocked the sword out of his hand and the guy said he was defeated, then Vash decided NOT to kill him because he trusted that a defeated enemy would lay down his arms, only to almost be killed while his back is turned. So I believe it is plausible, but I can see your point good sir.
UPDATE PLEASE! X3
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Been working on it, but have been very busy with other stuff lately
I have a lot of problems with this, but since I only believe in LOVE and PEACE, I'll give some constructive criticism instead of killing you.
1. Vash the Stampede would never have been caught so easily. I mean, seriously. Some random dude points a gun at his head and poof! Immediately Vash is docile and trapped? No. Vash has been in situations ten times as tricky and twisted his way out of them. So that's way out of character. If you wanted a good way to bring Vash into Equestria, you could have had him try to rescue a plant during a firefight, only to have the plant get hit and overload sending him unconsciousness to Equestria.
2. Twilight's out of character. She shouldn't just know about Humans; they don't exist on Equestria! Furthermore, why would she believe Vash, in his current pony form, is a human? No sense made there, bud. Also, she's too calm during Vash's explanation of his backstory, which leads me directly to point number three...
3. Vash explains his backstory. Vash would never do that, especially with how hard a past he's had. I'm prety sure he'd keep it to himself as long as he could, seeing as that's what he did in the Manga. Even so, that's not the biggest problem I had with the story.
Vash is a fucking pony. What the hell. Okay, I didn't list this as a number because making him a pony is your right as an author, and I'm not condemning you for it.
But it's just so disappointing! I mean, the legendary gunman worth sixty billion double-dollars is now a pony unable to even lift a gun. Even if he could lift a gun, why would I care? It'd look nothing but ridiculous.
So yeah, once I saw that, I pretty much noped the fuck out of here. But hey, that doesn't mean you have a bad story; I just can't stand ponification. It kinda ruins the whole point of a crossover, you know? At least that's how I feel about it. Either way, polish up your writing skills and write this story. You have something down and published, and so many people don't even get that far, so keep it up!
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Wow, thank you for that long reply, it's been a while since I was actually writing anything, due to everything else I have to do in life. I see the things you are saying, and how they would be out of character, sadly I cant really change that unless I go and do a rewrite. Still though, I should continue when i get more time on my hands, and I can see you point, your definite point, of them just being turned into ponies, literally like a majority of stories, meaning there isnt really much to offer thats different other than the fact it's one of the few fics on here that deals with Trigun (Don't quote me on that, I haven't browsed FIMFic in well over 5 months.) Most people if they see something in which they don't like wouldn't leave a long winded reply pointing out details like that, so I commend you for that as well as thank you.
also on a side note, the part at the end of point number 1 of how he should have gotten here with the plant just made me laugh. I don't have the greatest imagination, so that's a million times better than anything I could come up with... most of the time (My imagination tends to act up when I decide to get really hyper at like, 4 in the morning)
this really needs some work, I'll probably leave a comment with a few examples and maybe suggestions after I get some sleep
this will be epic.
will Wolfwood have the cross gun? (didn't watch too much of the anime or read much of the manga)
Oh, wow!
I like the idea of fic, I will wait for the next update