I am but a humble servant to my dreams.
This is a story I wrote originally with no intention of publishing. It was written off a random prompt of the following words: Orange, red, apocalypse, and fall. From there I wrote a story that has a plot, but doesn't follow it. That has characters, but forgets them from time to time, and that really really just wants to teach a single moral. Think before you act.
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Interesting framing device for the story. I'd love to see where this goes.
Pretty interesting.
I would say this isn't bad at all.
Awaiting further releases.
So, Rainbow Dash was human before
? Interesting story, would like to see more.
Thiiiiiiiiiiiis is cool. I like it! One quick punctuation thing, though.
Instead of
try
Also,
should be
And in cases of monologue breaks, do it like this:
Those are terrible example sentences, but I hope you get the gist. Hope that helps, and keep on writing!
--ForeverFreest
Seeing where this goes...
If there's been an apocalypse, then why is there no dark tag?
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Just because an apocalypse has occurred, does not mean that the story will necessarily be dark.