I am but a humble servant to my dreams.
By a remarkable event of celestial intervention, Rainbow Dash is made homeless, and struggles with how to live her life.
Literally written to the prompt "A celestial object lands in Rainbow's backyard."
She doesn't have a backyard, sooo.... I made it work.
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I like it! Can't wait to see more!
Poor Starlight and Spike
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Ask, and ye shall receive. I wrote all 3 chapters (It's a short fun story) so I'm gonna publish the 3rd one whenever someone asks me to, then if people want a 4th, I'll scrounge it up in the next few days.
Short and cute. I was hoping for FlutterDash, but nothing wrong with AppleDash either.
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Hehe thank you very much!
...Why is there a comma directly before an exclamation mark?
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...They slapped that channel with that "Kids Content" label, didn't they?
Because YouTube refused to COPPA the blame? Ugh.
Fuck off Peppa Pig. Your art style is lazy as shit, the writing is atrocious, and the characterisation is horrendous - Peppa and George are rarely punished for being spoilt little demon brats. What a great thing to teach children!
I grew up just fine without your porky ass, watching Save-Ums, Blue's Clues, Wiggles, Sesame Street and Hi-5. So much better kid's shows, them.
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Simply an error on my part, this story was written in the space of a couple days with no editor, so there was bound to be one, thank you for spotting it!
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Well, comments sections of practically any MLP video on youtube for last ~couple of months remind me of:
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so, nothing exceptional here
I thought this was quite good. It set out to show Rainbow's barriers being worn down so she could confront something she normally wouldn't think about, and that was done quite believably. How well the other characters were written was just icing on the cake.
This was really good storytelling. It's hilarious how oblivious RD was. Hilarious, but quite fitting. And AJs nonchalance was just... superb!
Always down to earth, always.
Considering the quality you're writing with, I'd totally be up for a fourth chapter. Until then, however, there's one thing left to say:
Thank you!
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That's uh... Interesting, though in my opinion any experience in life can be viewed as a game/opportunity, that doesn't make it beneficial or more valuable than the alternative.
I don't follow links, so I'll Google the information to find it.