Who knew that a long kept secret could come back to haunt you. Apparently that's to be expected, but in the case of Celestia and Luna's dark secret, it is an entirely different matter on its own. Applejack will learn more about honesty, along with her friends learning how to stop an ancient being. How far will everypony have to go to end the madness? Very far. With one pony in particular learning a secret her own family has been holding on to for some time.
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This style is a little more easy to read
Nice fic by The way, very intrigant
That description looks so interesting that I had to favorite it immediately, reading it soon.
Mr Septonic
I came to give feedback on this story, but after reading the first chapter, I have no idea what is going on. You defiantly need to make this story clearer. The only events I can remember are 'they go treasure hunting' and 'they find... something'. You don't have to give away all the details. You can leave mystery, but right now it's just incomprehensible.
2560501
Thanks for pointing this out, I was actually waiting for someone to say this. I realize the first chapter is as it seems, "rushed", and does not reveal a whole lot. It was the way I decided to open the story up, completely shrouded in mystery. That's also why I put in that little explanation of O's past in -- Change of Plans -- to help show a little background. As the story goes on more and more will be revealed. I'd say more but that would ruin what I have planned for chapters 7 - 9.
Mr Septonic
Awesome!
You've alive! Good chapter as well.