Pirate Dash has gotten board of Twilight and seeks out other romantic possibilities.
Arthor's Notes: This is the first fic I have ever ritten. Pleas be nice with your coments. All Charters used in this story belong to their respective creators.
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I have...no words...for this.
Not sure if real or April Fool's joke...
Trollfic is trawling.
Ya... Probably not getting old of Twilight
Was this guy drunk when he wrote this? Or is this an april fools joke?
2357080 both most likely
Huh.
*Sniff*
Only once in a while do I stumble across such beauty, and, by Celestia's beard, words cannot describe how wonderful your epic tale is. The characterisation, the plot, the humour-! It's perfect. Now excuse while I go sob to myself in a dark corner and wail about my stories never reaching your level of perfection.
The thing is that this fic tries too hard to be bad, like it feels unnatural.
Its like if a Republican tried to act poor. Doesn't matter how hard they tried, they just don't know how.
Oh god why. The failure in this is so intentional that it makes my eyes hurt.
You spell upon "upawn". Only someone wtih a decent grasp of the English language, coupled with the desire to not use it, would use such a spelling.
Remember when trolls used to be subtle? Pepperidge Farm remembers.
2364056>>2364253 I'm confused as to why anyone would criticize something that's trying to suck. And no, I wasn't really going for subtlety with this fic, just going for an april fools joke. Still, since you probably don't have anything better to do, what do you suggest I could do "better" if I decided to make a sequel to this?
2365669 The reason I gave a little criticism is because I am a fan of troll fiction, and have in fact written a troll fic before.
People have being criticizing things which have tried to suck for a long, long time. Shakespeare for example, some of his stuff is just awful but people still take his work very seriously.
And its pretty blatant that subtlety wasn't your intention.
I'm also just as confused as you are, as to why you insult me with the whole "Still, since you probably don't have anything better to do" thing, since lets not forget that we're both on a site dedicated to a toy that is marketed to little girls. And then ask for my help?
Geez, forgive me for telling you what I thought of your story.
2367639 Touché. I'm sorry for offending you, I just was poking a bit of fun at the concept and you do have good points there. I would like to know what I could do "better" next time though and I'll look up your troll fic. Is it on fimfiction or is it somewhere else?
2368155 That's quite alright, I can understand why you would say so but I mean, it was hardly a in-depth analysis, if so I would totally agree with you.
I would make typos even more aplenty and I would say to try and make more pathetic attempts to be smart. You also keep the formatting too good, it should read like its been broken, fixed with duck tape and then broken again.
Its on Fanfiction.net and to be a self-promoting twat, I would say for examples of things I've said above, read through all three chapters of my own story:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7705610/1/Modern-Warmare-4-Starship-Troopers
Also, I see that you've started to get into The Conversion Bureau, just to warn you I would be very careful about what that pro-nazism Chatoyance has written. I'm not kidding, that lady hates humans with a passion with the irony being completely lost on her.
Edit: typo fix