Spoilers for Bioshock Infinite, people. Seriously. Scroll down at your own risk.
After killing Booker, Elizabeth heads to Equestria to secure her existence as her past catches up to her. Equestria begins to suffer temporal and spacial disruptions.
May involve Eleanor Lamb and Bioshock 1/2 universe later on. I'm bad at descriptions, just give it a chance and read a bit. Rated Teen to play it safe. I'm still pretty new to writing, so don't expect too much of me.
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YEEESSSSSS!!!!!!!!
Finally!
An 'Infinite' crossover with the Luteces AND
A little excessive having Celestia know the Luteces (Luna would be better), but all in all, very good.
I shall fave this immediately.
Can't wait to see the next chapter
2480038 Whoa, whoa, whoa. Those spoilers in the description were spoilered for a reason.
2480876 sorry about that forgot that people might've well ya know.
BUCK ME FOR HAVING MY MOUSE EXACTLY ON THE SPOILER TAG. GOD DAMN IT GOD DAMN IT.
Seriously, can you PLEASE hide spoilers from the story description completely? You nearly ruined my chances of effectively experiencing one of the best games to come out in recent years, and I'm trying my best not to punch my monitor at the moment.
Well, fellow amateur writer, I must say that you are off to a good start. I'm about as confused as Elizabeth is about the whole dimensions-collapsing, Lutece's-are-totally-fine thingy. I must admit, I am a tad confused with what Elizabeth did with her past, infant self. Did she give her a parting peck on the cheek or something? And with Booker, did he have a vision of Columbia or something?
Also, I agree with riku, Celestia and the Luteces knowing each other is % bit sketchy. However, it seems less sketchy than, say Elizabeth happening upon the universe herself.
Finally, I wonder if the dimension-hopping somehow factors into Spike's disappearance? Only time will tell. lol
The story has been faved, and my interest piqued. Possibly in reverse order. Can't wait for more!
Grace and Peace, and Happy Writing!
I shall watch as this is an interesting plot you have going.
Also I too am doing an 'Infinite' crossover. Come take a gander is want.
I'm liking this idea! Fav and like to you, author!
A little nitpick though, the Luteces aren't exactly twins.
Also, I only just noticed the Mare-Do-Well tag. Wonder how she will play out
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Yeah, I know they aren't twins, but they tend to refer to eachother as such once in a while if I recall. The whole Mare-do-Well thing, if it happens, won't for awhile. I should probably remove the tag.
Cool idea and a great start, both well narrated and well written!
I like it and you should probably bring up the fact that Elizabeth and the Luteces are polar opposites after the ending.
The Luteces exist everywhere at once and this gives them massive knowledge of the whole picture but very little power to directly interfere.
Elizabeth on the other hand is a singularity, she is unique now after all the others never existed and that gives her very limited knowledge about the whole picture but massive power to interfere.
At least that is my headcanon for the ending.
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Huh. I'll think about that.
Boop.
The never ending possibilities still confuse me, oh well I can shoot water from my hand!
Pew pew!
I am instantly in love with this! :D
Nice... MOAR!
Chapter 2 in progress.
I'm going to favorite this, but not like it just yet. And how funny that I'm writing a crossover with the same game.
It's good- well...- no, it is good. This is well narrated and thought out, and your Luteces adhere to Infinite's Luteces. I like that you stayed true to the characterization. Elizabeth seems a little sketchy, but I think your Celestia makes up for it. That's a nice touch there. The only issue I had with it is that you use a lot of line breaks. I get the fact that you want to describe a few events going on at once, but it gets confusing. That's what happens when you have so many events in one cluster. Spread them out a little, you know?
But I shall be watching this.
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Yeah, the three main things that I have problems with when I write are pacing, tense, and line breaks.
Whoops. I might have accidentally published the second chapter. Sorry for anybody who just came here for the alert.
Update?
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When I finish finals.
Soon.Done with finals. Finishing it up.
Oh fuck yes. Finally got around to reading this. Prothean, I don't know what your thought process was for this, but for the love of Columbia; moar.
You did some fine, in-characer work here. Great job, hope the next chapter'll be just as good.
More.
NOW.
But do slow down a bit on story.
Truly, I'd love to see more of this. I gotta wonder what Elizabeth is going to get up to, and hooooooo history with Celestia and the Luteces! Gotta know!
You've just caught my eye. Please finish this story. I beg you.