Having the power to sense all the love in the whole of Equestria, but how do you deal with it when you fall in love your self. Join Cadence and Twilight as they battle their feelings while trying not to lose their friendship.
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No offense, this getting ridiculous now. I get that this is suppose to explain why the characters introduced in the story aren't at the wedding, but in doing this, it's making Celestia look like the biggest fool ever. And yes, I know the reason is because her desperation to making things normal is causing her to be blind to what they're saying, but there's a fine line between being blind to something, and just being a complete fool. To be honest, at this point I feel like before the end of this, Celestia's going to be in full tyrant mode and locking up anyone who speaks any ill of Cadence.
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I'm inclined to agree. Cadance recovers after only 1 week? Stops her medication altogether? Hasn't seen the doctor in 10 months? Reaper suddenly rebels? Yeah right. Celestia is a dumb dumb. If you say the name Cadance, to the dungeons with you! Reeetro asks some questions? Dungeon.
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I can understand the concern. It's really only Reeetro, Reaper and Spark that end up in trouble. As the longer Chrisaliis keeps up this charade the more of her hive is getting into the castle. Replacing ponies one by one. So it's not just Cadances behaviour but the fact that a lot of the other ponies around the castle appear to happy, Celestia is falling into a false sense of security. The idea that 'everyone else is happy and it's only these three that have a problem' so despite how much it's hurting her. She'd viewing them as the one percent.
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I guess we find it really easy to judge Celestia because we can see what's going on in the background. As far as she knows Twilight is gone, everypony is still recovering and healing and cadence appears to be getting better. I like think that regardless of how intuitive you are, when you've become devoid of all hope you clutch to any kind of happiness while you can. She only hear that reaper had attacked cadence, and when she questioned him he refused to answer (because he couldn't.) She doesn't intend to hurt them but rather try to and minimize the fallout, keep a hold of that small amount of happiness before realizing.
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OnTheTrot
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And to be honest I just wanted to create that kind of 'if they had just waited and talked, this wouldn't have happened' moment.
I like to think that if Spark had spoken to Reaper and found out that he couldn't speak and went to go tell Celestia she would have listened and Chryaliss would have been found out much sooner. But because Spark broke Reaper out and they ran, it just made them look guilty which made Celestia think that she couldn't even trust the ponies closest to her anymore. It's also why she sent Reeetro to the dungeon, because she didn't want him to do something similar.
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OnTheTrot
I know this story is a year old but I just got to it. This chapter you did indeed cross a line into stupid. Like the orb of stupidity trope level. You say well we know a lot Celestia doesn't this is true but this chapter the Dr is over the top stupid. Didn't even bother saying uh... someone is using mind control magic on Shining. You know a provable right then and there claim. He could have continued into... and Cadence bleeds green blood but that prolly would have led to the dungeons with this Celestia and as bad as that is I'll give you that pass even if you don't deserve it. Still Shining and mind control Celestia checks and would want to given her ridiculous overprotective acts toward Cadence. Poof your story self destructs. To prevent it you just made the Dr walk off to jail instead of saying one thing privately to the only pony he could take that risk with.