Luna is searching for answers after she meet somepony in the Everfree forest, but she finds something else.
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Like always I'm sorry about the bad grammar, but besides that I hope you enjoyed or liked the story. If anyone wuold like to edit it that would be great so send me a pm or comment
Thanks for the comments, faves or likes.
You may want to reread this, there are quite a few spelling mistakes and errors
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I'd rather cut my head off for rushing to finish this as fast as I can cos of no time to write :(
2340226 A story will come out horribly when rushed. Even if it takes you a month per chapter take your time and make sure the story's as good as it can be. When you WANT to write, work on the story more. When you'd rather be doing something else, do something else. Nobody will be mad if it takes you awhile to release a story
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Nobody, except me ;), the 2nd half of it I wrote today since I knew the next couple of days I won't have time to think/write anything normal so I was like wth.. I planned to finished this like week ago, but shit working all the time and didn't write a word to it and It pissed me off more than anything else...:( and about grammar well yeah.. I can't do anything about it, it sucks.. should've put the same thing in disc like always..
I don`t really mind the spelling errors.
Very nice short story, keep them coming.
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Thanks a lot, I'm glad you liked it. I'll try to come up with something more extended story than the one's before, but no luck so far, dunno why :/, It's one of the many things what bothers me for a while now.. *sigh* (when I have time to think) -_-"
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I personally don`t mind short stories. But I like long ones too.
Don`t worry about the long stories. You`ll get one done sooner or later, I`m sure of it
Hmmmm. Luna and Chrysalis? I like this new shipping.
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I love both of them and the changelings as well so I was like wth why not try to write something. I tried to create something what would show that they are not as evil as they looked like. I hope I could accomplish that and I'll have the chance to write other changeling stories :)
Thanks for the fav ;)
The story was way too fast paced and the spelling errors were numerous. Please edit this to fix the grammar and pace of the story.
I thought it was nice. It definitely has potential to be a great chapter story if you want, but oneshots are cool too. I'd love to know what happens next, though I have a good idea. Overall, I was absorbed in your story. Awesome job!
I liked it, a lot. Plus, I'm s sucker four happy (even if only implied) endings for Chryssie and the changelings.
Cya
Raziel-chan
2013 was a different time.
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indeed i was 11 in 2013 and i was in 5th grade? idk we don't use the american school grade system, anyway it seems so far away, i'm an adult now, mlp is finished and responsabilities falls upon me :(