Keith gets more than he bargained for one evening when a mysterious hand reaches out from his television screen and pulls him into Equestria. However, he doesn't realize he's a bigger part of that world than he thinks.
Title says all. First MLP fanfic I wrote a long time ago, during the summer after my junior year that I permanently shelved in the same year. Written before I knew self-inserts were a thing. Only thing I edited was so the script stuff I wrote in works on FiMFiction.
I HATE. HATEFUL COMMENT.
I AM PIRATE AAAAARRR!
PONY
>Mandopony in the title image
4/10 almost got me
you should continue this some time it is interesting
please continue the story when you can this is the most unique story i have read to date 5/5
MOAR!!!
Yay! HiE self insert!
READ ALL THE SELF INSERTZ!!!
ZS AT THE END OF WORDZ ARE KOOL!!
RAWR BECAUSE RAWR!!
This is actually really good :3
still good! :D
DUDE CONTINUE!!!
IT IS SOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD :D
Aye aye, Sir!
What a steaming pile of crap this story is. My god, a self insert, the creativity is fucking petrifying from it's lack of existance! The main character is a copy paste of the very definiton of sickening unoriginality! I could barely endure though all of what utter shit you presented to us readers that you absurdly call a first paragraph.
Hey, just doing what you requested.
( I'll actually read it in the morning, it's midnight right now, I gotta sleep man.)
Before I even begin reading, I decided to give you a pity like. I hope I don't regret it.
2337644 beautiful
2338616 you might
2341260Nnope! Excellent!
I kinda like this. If you ever plan on continuing this, I'll be following.
Dangit. It just started getting interesting...