This story is a sequel to PonyHammer 40,000: Magic of War | SpiritStorm
Sub-Sector Arctika. This cluster of worlds stands on the very edge of the Equestrium of Ponies. From this frontier came the Blood Phoenixes, a Chapter of the Empress's own Pony Marines. Now savage animals seek to overrun the sector, and break the Blood Phoenixes once and for all. Captain Goliath Nule and a hoofful of Pony Marines lead the raw recruits defending these worlds.
Now, another Pony Marine joins this desperate battle. A newly promoted Commander, ready to lead in our darkest hour. His name is Hammerheart. And he will tip the balance towards victory.
(WarHammer 40,000 belongs to Games Workshop)
Nice concept? Yes. I approve entirely of the concept. But you really need to write it better. I mean, all we've seen so far is the command center. No action. And ridiculously short chapters.
Oh, well. Sorry, mate. But keep writing!
2660958 As I mentioned in my previous stories, I'm only doing cutscenes and in-game dialogs. Don't worry, there will be some action in later chapters.
Alright... but still not my type of story. But that's alright: I don't have to agree with everything. However much I would love to.
2662500 I'm glad dat we can to an agreement of a sort.
Of the PonyHammer 40,000 series, what fanfic came first in chronological order?
3614142 I'm sorry, what? You mean which of my PonyHammer 40,000 stories came first?
That would be Magic of War.
3615231 Yes.
3618576 I trust you have your answer.