Hammerheart and the Blood Phoenixes had succeeded in killing Cloudbasha, and returned to the Ponigeddon.
"Well done, Commander Hammerheart." said Goliath. "We will find who is strengthening this Hog horde yet. I am deploying a team to search the Hog remains for clues as to who is agitating them."
"Have we received any additional word from the neighboring sector, Cap'n?" Applejack asked.
"No." said Nule, "We have lost all contact with them."
"What could possibly take out the communications network of an entire sector in a few days?" Applejack asked.
"We will have to investigate," said Goliath, "but the defense of Dolmaska must come first. Commander Hammerheart, deploy to the surface as soon as your squads are ready."
Hammerheart's squads were more than ready as he brought up the orbital map of Tangerine High Pass, where more Hogs were roaming about.
"Commander Hammerheart, the Hogs have struck another valuable target." said Nule. "A powerful Hog Chieftain named Buttkicka is leading the assault, but someone must have pointed him at this target, likely without his even knowing it. Take your squads and eliminate this beast before he does more damage. Keep on the lookout for clues as to who may be manipulating him."
Nice concept? Yes. I approve entirely of the concept. But you really need to write it better. I mean, all we've seen so far is the command center. No action. And ridiculously short chapters.
Oh, well. Sorry, mate. But keep writing!
2660958 As I mentioned in my previous stories, I'm only doing cutscenes and in-game dialogs. Don't worry, there will be some action in later chapters.
Alright... but still not my type of story. But that's alright: I don't have to agree with everything. However much I would love to.
2662500 I'm glad dat we can to an agreement of a sort.