I internally winced at "The Chicago Cubs lost again." Isn't this supposed to be fantasy? Why do you have to bring in the harsh realities and crush my dreams?
Oh, crap, make it stop. I didn't think just over 500 words would have me laughing this much. Favorited for the Convenient Mountains alone. The Contrivance Caverns and Backstory Forest was dessert, coffee and a cigarette.
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I internally winced at "The Chicago Cubs lost again." Isn't this supposed to be fantasy? Why do you have to bring in the harsh realities and crush my dreams?
Oh, crap, make it stop. I didn't think just over 500 words would have me laughing this much.
Favorited for the Convenient Mountains alone. The Contrivance Caverns and Backstory Forest was dessert, coffee and a cigarette.
2485949 That's part of its awful charm, and to remind us this is still a fic we're reading.
Change the Chicago Cubs to the Pittsburgh Pirates, and I'd believe it. Home team is worst team.
The writing could stand to be a little more lemony, but at least it's self-aware.
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