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You have been feeling a deep connection with your favorite show My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic and you don't know why. But today you are about to get answers.
You are having a great day while your parents are away on a 'business trip' and your siblings are away at 'summer camp'. You are home alone when you receive a unmarked package at your door step...
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Woo, first comment! If only this would happen...
there are a couple spelling and grammar errors(I'm no English teacher, so I'll leave that area to someone else) but other than that, I'm really intrigued by this concept! I will definitely be keeping a eye on this story.
For some reason this gave me hope >.> Dunno why.
I love this story, thank you for writing it!
I am the long lost Bat-Pony Alicorn Princess....
I AM ECLIPSE OF EQUESTRIA!!!!
2318390 It says "Complete" on the status tag.
Oh if it could happen..
If only.
But still good story.
i wish that this were real it would be so awesome to be my fan character cuz i would have the powers of a dragon and a unicorn
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marry me and have my mutant parasprite offspring
2318473 OH! it said incomplete when I clicked on it. egg on my face.
So I am an earth pony with a magical amulet that gives me the capabilities of a unicorn, but kills me if I have it taken off? I can live with that!
Thank you MasterBrony2012, for this wonderful story. It makes me want to truly believe that it is true.
If only I could find a genie in a magic lamp like the kind that gives me 3 wishes, I would wish for this to be true and discard all my other wishes!
This is truly an amazing story! Ive always hoped to live in Equestria since I discovered this show about 3 months ago... wouldn't it be amazing if this happened? If all of us were went there?
Oh, how I wish this would happen!
It all makes sense now!
If it were real, it would be awesome
i'm adding this to my favourites so that i may pass my judgement when the next chapter is released.
if this was real there would be so many new alicorns... am i the only one who'd settle for a regular earth pony? my oc is unicorn though.
*Sniffles* WHY DOESN'T THIS HAPPEN!?!?!?
i dont like the idea behind this
id rather be human than pony to be honest
If it were only real... But then my sister would be all alone.
if only this could happen it would be awesome!
SOON.
I would go to Equestria if I could take my computer.
Ha ha, no.
Ur doin it rong.
Creepiest thing? Right at the part about the ringing phone, my phone rang...
Eh, given the chance, I'd think I would stick with my hands and internet, rather than go to Equestria. Plantigrade bipeds FTW!
Sooooo creepy...
I love it! Keep up the amazingness that is this story!
Have a mustache
Well made, well done!
But, it was kinda creepy, when he got a knock on the door, so did I...
And it was a package...
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Actually, goddesses is the correct spelling. He's doing it write. (See what I did there?)
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Too bad you missed my real meaning.
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I have shamed my ancestors. I must commit crowbar seppuku...
*dink*
Oh, right, still wearing the HEV suit. Foiled again I dare say...
Holy crap... This is so true...
I wonder if there really was a pony like Dusty in Equestria...
I would like nothing more than for this to happen. I'd be doin' this shit right here:
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You bastard.
How dare you simply dismiss it as creepy...? BLASPHEMY, I SAY!
...
My OC would get all the bitches.
...
I guess?
I'm a fox from equestria?
Wait nvm it's an oc pony
Oh, none of you know how badly I want to do that... I want to become my OC, and go to Equestria! Let me be my Pegasus, Lightning Flicker! Please let this happen! Please! An hour after I read this story, and an hour before posting this comment, I dreamt what would the life in Equestria be like if I live there, now. I woke up 2 minutes ago from the time I posted this. Not kidding. I silently cried when I found out it never happened. I want it to happen... So badly...I had so many feels when I awoke from my dream. I can tell other here had the same saddening reaction I had...
Aww, it's sweet! Though it could use a bit of revision =P
Lauren Faust is Xenu now?
This is so sweet
Although... it could use a little revision
But I loved it :D Nice story, *adds to favs and likes*
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You mean miss living in a world WITH violence?
Also, about OC ponies...
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Enough said.
Okay, weighing in on the whole OC thing. Presumably, the OC is some sort of spiritual/genetic memory attempting to apply itself to this 'link'. The fact that the memory is several millennia old in itself would presumably cause distortion and degradation of the memory, hence 'demonic, alicorn OCs'. Also, since this 'link' has been established recently, this 'memory' is coming to the forefront and attempting to apply itself to a world it knows it belongs to, except certain details are wrong, so the memory changes to fit it, for example, instead of simply having a Pegasus relative that they didn't like, they are now Rainbow Dashes/ Fluttershys/ any other in show pegasus's disillusioned relative. The memories, coming back subconsciously because of this link, bend to fit established 'facts'.
There, with my explanation, this story is now perfectly plausible. Yay for science!
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Prepare for annoying factual rant.
While it's certainly true that the original MLP generation, and all generations procceding FiM, was meant for little girls, things are very different now. When Faust began creating her spin on the MLP universe, she intended to create a show that ALL ages and genders could enjoy, not a show for girls who were just beginning to get into Barbie. It had always been Lauren's goal to make at least a dent in the girl steryotype that would have stopped most people from watching shows like hers. I'm sure that, through the bronies, she has achieved that goal tenfold. So no, it's not a show for little girls that we should be considered creepy for watching.
I won't deny you your opinion, though.
2321990 I did this on Google Docs so it fixed all the spelling errors for me. As for Grammar errors, I would need Word for that, and I try the best I can to follow all the grammatical rules and stuff. Though sometimes there are just to many for me to remember or care about for a Fan-Fiction.
Anyways...at least itsn't as bad as some other stories that i have seen with errors with every word and sentence.
This story, I like it. Why can't this happen to us?????
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I lel
Civil war? The Fallen? Direct monologue with a Celestia? This story is direct, fresh and predictable as the American propaganda. But the idea is good, the author could construct on it very quite good story, but alas.
make into full story... PLEASE?
Pretty much the first thing that popped into my head after reading this.