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Golden Flare


I love to create stories.

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You are a human. You were somehow whisked away from your home on Earth, and found yourself lost in a magical world full of colorful talking ponies, who were skeptical of you at first, but welcomed you with open arms-uh, hooves. And somehow, you couldn't have been happier.

You've lived in Ponyville for a long time and gotten used to your surroundings. Then one day, you checked your calendar and saw that it was almost Thanksgiving... Oh, yeah, that's right. It would be your first Thanksgiving without your family...

A certain group of ponies take note of your depression and are going to do everything they can to help you.

Can they fill the gap where your family has left? Or will you succumb to the holiday blues and shut yourself away from Equestria forever?

This is a Second Person "Human in Equestria" story. This is my first time writing a Second Person fanfiction, so let me know in the comments if I need to improve.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

This really touched my heart. Great job on the story.:heart: Also, if you didn't get my message from before, some people on fanfiction are enjoying your kingdom hearts:EQ story and they really want a sequel. Ever get the chance, contact me when it will be up. Talk to you later bro.:twilightsmile:

5342416 Thanks, this was my first time writing a 2nd Person fanfic and I'm not the best when it comes to Sad fics, so I'm glad to hear that I did a good job. :twilightsmile:

Also, yes, I did get your message, but you said to answer you back if I had the sequel up, that's why I didn't PM you back, sorry if there was any confusion

Aww, no worries bro, it was my fault actually. I need to put my words in better next time. But above all, keep up the good work. And if it's not much trouble, could you pm me and tell me the release date for the sequel, the viewers on fanfiction REALLY want a sequel to your story. I can't blame them. They really love it.

5342699 It's ok :twilightsmile:

And, honestly, I can't really determine when I'll have the sequel out, I have a lot stuff on my plate, but I can tell you that I'll get it out as soon as I can, I've never given up on any of my stories and I don't plan on starting now

Dang! This was really well done! Nice work!:pinkiehappy:

Even though it was just one chapter it was well written well done

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