• Published 20th Mar 2013
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The Only Love for All - King Artermis



a story of humans and ponies that get together. also epic battles between humans and Changelings.

Comments ( 4 )

good story just a good story :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

and thanks for the help with my story

It's a good read, though the grammar is a bit weak. That said I can't do much better myself.
7.5/10 = Very good, but needs some work.

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Okay first no they are not gods, because they are the living elements :ajbemused:. Second, I intend to have a Q&A session on the twentieth chapter so please save your questions for that. Third is that if you do have questions please send me a personal message and i will get back to you as soon as I can.

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