When Twilight Sparkle performs a spell that takes over her molecular structre, she becomes an earth pony. Little does she know that there is no possible way to reverse the spell and whomever currently posesses her horn only recieved half the power. So Twilight has to live her life as an earth pony from now on. The only problem is she doesn't know how...
The premise has some merit, but you need to do some hard work on your grammar before this story stands a chance.
Twilight without magic could actually be cool.
BABY DON'T HURT ME
This premise, honestly, sounds brilliant. I'll have to read it sometime. Who knows? Maybe Captive Audience will have another story candidate for his newest volume...
'Course, that's if you're willing.
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Uh I'm a girl. xD
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My grammar isn't perfect, of course I indeed know that. Something of which I definitley will need to fix.
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If you're referring to Captive Audience, that wasn't a reference to you :V. It's a kind of story I'm writing where I go around FIMFiction, finding story ideas that the authors want executed better, then I simply execute those ideas in my own style.
Haven't released the story yet, but it's really good practice.
uH, IM REALY LOOKING FORWARD TO THIS.
Use the kind changing spell again. Wait it randomly went to pinkie. Dang it.