This story is a sequel to Pinkamena's Awakening
It's been several months since Pinkamena's re-imprisonment, and the residents of Equestria have been working diligently to repair the damages she has caused. But when Pinkie Pie decides that she can no longer accept Pinkamena being trapped again, she seeks help from her friends in order to bring her back to reality. Will others accept her return and help her lead a normal life? Or will she be rejected from everyone and fall into depression and insanity once again?
WARNING: This story will have a few OC's of my friends. They will have an impact on the main storyline, but I promise to make it as enjoyable as possible. Also, if you have read my story "A Wandering Soul", Lilith will make an appearance, but everything that she did in the story will be nonexistent.
Glad it's finally here.
2251457 Yep She's back, I'll try to get chapters out more fluently assuming I have the time to do so, sorry for the long wait
2251514 I never minded the wait that much.
yay, the sequel is here.
i hope you can update it soon, i liked it so far so here is my Fav and Like.
2251982 I'm elated glad you like it so far!
Pinkamena : Rainbow Dash , I find your lack of self control disturbing ...
Glad to ses a sequel , I love this Pinkamena , even if I think that she is hiding something ( or that's just her rater sociale awkward personnality... )
Have a
2252413 I'm happy you enjoy it so there will indeed be more to come
YES! I've been waiting for this for so looooong!
2255905 I'm glad you were excited for it I apologize though for the wait, and I hope you'll enjoy it
your story
2256277 I try
O. o A new alicorn sister? I like the name though, and it seems like she's gonna have a big role in this. Can't wait to see more
2257450 Yes indeed
Wow, this is a good start in my eyes. Personally, I'm rooting for Pinkamena since Eternal Sleep seems a bit cocky...
Just something that I've noticed though. You tend to use the word "said" a lot during dialogue, which gets kind of dull after a while.
i.e, "Thank you... I'm just... so happy!" The Little Pony said.
"Tell me, what's your name?" Eternal Sleep said.
"My name?" The Little Pony said. "...It's Lilith."
Maybe try to work on that a bit? Otherwise, I'm really enjoying this story, and the quick updates are nice. ^^
2257619 Hmm you're right, I'll try to use more of a variety when I write next time I just seem to focus on the main story rather than minor details like that so I apologize
XD
This is SO AWESOME
2257683 Glad you're enjoying it
Generally, I think you did pretty well. Congrats E.S. did seem a little.. off in some scenes and spot-on in others, but meh xD Like, her extreme cockiness... I'm not sure if that's how I would've handled the situation. Other than that, it was great. I anxiously await the next chapter
Awww........FUCK this story is so good and you take to damn long writing.(my point is that this is so good i need MOAR)
Also just wondering will Pinkimena's name be changed to Inkimena?
2259084 Hmm I wasn't really thinking on changing her name Why do you propose Inkimena?
Damn, that was a nice fight xD It's probably for the best that you kept the winner ambiguous, honestly. You handled it quite well~ I didn't think a scythe would come into play, either, but lo and behold, it did xD Very nice
2262419 Thank you very much good sir
2260969 Other fics I read but now that I think of it I like her name the way it is now.(remember this is your story not mine it's your choice to change her name)
Who the hell is the brown pony?
2263219 Spoilers
2263268 My heart is a stone cold motherfucker (pardon the language) but for a very important reason. My pain is very great and fics like these help me forget the pain.
And currently I am listening to some music that has reminded me of my pain but i must listen.
I love it but the music is true.
What sticks out to me is "I will never be the same again."
Do not ask why I am this but understand that you have helped me with your story.
2263319 That makes me really happy to have such an impact I'm glad that my stories have helped you through whatever it is you're experiencing.
2263447 All the stories help me forget the pain so its good that your writing this. Its better than videogames which I used to play alot.
2263447 Also check out a story I am writing.(through an xbox is a pain in the ass so I'll save it until I get a new pc) Also I feel a little better. I have had worse reminders, what I wrote about an hour ago was about one of my reminders. But these stories are the magic that helps. (only one story was able to jerk my tears) If someone can do that to me then it's a good thing. Don't fret I read em to understand some shit in the world anyways.
Le brown pony
DUN DUN DUUUNNN!!!
Oh my god, a "Brown Pony", I wonder who THAT could be... xD
Pinkimena you evil little thing you.
Hermaeus Mora Is a good Daedra here.... Cool.
*laughs* And so Pinkamena evilness returns.
skyrim, really. oh well still makes it interesting
2290895 I was hoping someone would get the reference Sorry, it's something I tend to do with my stories
Poor Lilith, just like she said herself, they were so similar, and she was just trying to help... But I do think Twilight will eventually figure things out, with that hint from Hermaeus Mora.
I sense another battle between Pinkamena and Eternal Sleep, heh...
2290917 it's ok bro i said it was interesting :)
Ah finally the evil character has become evil again. I can't wait to see what will happen next.
One of my guesses is that she will try to take over Eternal Sleep's body.
Damnit I need MOAR!!!
2305525 All in due time my friend
2305533 Hell Yeah!!!
Here is da Stache
Damn this is getting epic right now.
I feel so bad for pinkamena. T_T
Curse you, Eternal sleep!!!!
Damnit I need MOAR!!!!!
Man that will be quite a hangover after this is all finished.
You seem to have a knack for writing fight scenes, Georgie xD This was probably the most brutal fight you've written yet (especially at the beginning and end xD) Hell, it went from a fight to downright torture near the end. Flutters and Dashie will feel THAT tomorrow (and the next day... and the next day.. and the next day.. xD) They got FUGGED UP
2312001 XD Thank you good sir, I am glad that you thought so
Fun thing to do: exchange grimms hehe's with OuiOui's.
XD
I now remember why I hate cupcakes
2320187 Oh? Should I be happy or sad?