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Just here to read, and write, some FanFic. I really enjoy this stuff, so if you ever need an editor I can look it over for you, just hit me up!
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A few spelling errors near the beginning, nothing really distracting. It was also kind of slow to begin with, but once you got into it... Damn. You really knocked it out of the park. This is seriously the best story I've read in a good bit. Well done.
Also, for the record: I'd like to see a sequel.
2235059 Thank you for the kind words, Sham Wow! guy
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Vince. my name is Vince. (well, the ShamWow! guy's name is Vince. my real name is Drew, but that's like the pachyderm that nobody remembers: irr-elephant.)
Nice job on expanding the two comics this is based off of.
Great work and this is how I want to see Scoots as adult. Just beautiful.
I didn't exactly edit per se, but I'm really happy how this turned out.
Very nicely done
2236141 you're giving yourself less credit than you deserve, John :P
2237363 While I put in lots of input, I didn't edit in the traditional sense. The traditional sense would imply I read the entire story and fixed things before you published it :P
Why does no one read these awesome stories you write?
Conspiracy.
2237376 'awesone', implying that I actually have ok stories
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replace all instances of "love" with "dont stop writing for the sake of greyskull"