Applejack loves stargazing. After a hard day, she unwinds in the quiet peace of the night.
One night, she finds herself transfixed by the appearance of a beautiful white unicorn.
The smallest and most unexpected of encounters can worm it's way into a weathered heart.
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Needs Alt ending. Now.
I liked this. Sailing the underrepresented ship S.S. Rairijack.
Wow. Just, wow. Hold on a sec I need to get rid of my heartburn again. (Yeah, that's how heartwarming it was.)
Nothing about the grammar really kicked me out of the story, though I did giggle when I was about to start reading and my eyes glanced over to the word shit.
That was cute.
Beautiful.
Sweet as is, but I'd love an alternate ending if you'd be so very kind?
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Alternate ending and full length story in the works.
Thanks for reading and commenting! It means a lot to me.
That was short, sweet, and beautiful. I loved it!
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oh yes please, extended story! YES YES YES YES yes yes...
Nice job! I'm always a fan of rarijack, and this is a good one. Keep going!
It may have been short, but that's what it was intended to be. Even though i'd liked a longer fic, i think the story makes up for it. Really good!
That was really cute
Here have this;
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Very cute. and I like that you didn't type AJ's accent into her English.
It would have been sooooo nice if Rarity would have made a conection between the apple and Applejack ^^
Just a liiiiittle hint, not letting it end so.... one-sided-ish ^^
I like your writing style, and your grammar is fine, there are worse out there (take mine for example
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An alternate ending would be quite interessting.... I'll wait ... Right here