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Ties

On a fateful night, Blueblood and Spike are both spurned by the mare of their dreams. Alone and lost, they face turning points in their lives.

A story about the ties that bind and the ties one breaks.

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take flight

take flight #1 · Jul 23rd, 2012 · · ·

It's good to be back

Yes, I know I have a loose sense of continuity

Zion

Zion #2 · Jul 24th, 2012 · · ·

959030

Welcome back!

Continuity is for biscuitkickers. We roll with it.

Path_of_cloud

Path_of_cloud #3 · Jul 24th, 2012 · · ·

Character tags

Path_of_cloud

Path_of_cloud #4 · Jul 24th, 2012 · · ·

Okay so now that I read this. It was good.

Blueblood's story screams of lust, but at the same time a deeper sorrow. Spike's story conveys love, and sadly, a determination meet with bittersweet return. I'm always into a good Sparity and a happy ending. This is not the case here however, but it is very well written.

All the same, add the damn character tags.

SerenityViewer

SerenityViewer #5 · Jul 24th, 2012 · · ·

Very good descriptions, has a lot of potential! You will add more to this later, right?

abandoned2123

abandoned2123 #6 · Aug 12th, 2012 · · ·

I love the juxtaposition between Blueblood's carnal lust and Spike's naive innocence. It was short and bitter, and I wish that there was more... Even so, this is well-done as a stand alone piece.

Calen

Calen #7 · Sep 5th, 2012 · · ·

It's interesting, I'll say. I'll probably never have the stones to write something like this. Yet, this story of sweet unrequited love is delicious on my tongue despite my green eyed envy.

Good work.

Fury of the Tempest