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Mudpony


Confound these wretched equines! For every one I fling away, a dozen more vex me!

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In the wake of the Babs Seed Incident, the CMC discovered one stuffed animal was missing from their clubhouse. After months of intelligence gathering, they believe they have found her current location. Tonight, they go on a mission to retrieve Mrs. Buzzy.

Note: story not related to the RDP universe. I'm just using Mrs. Buzzy ;)

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Was bored today. Had an idea. Wrote the idea. Now back to working on the two stories I should have been working on.

Borrowing Mrs. Buzzy from Rainbow Dash Presents's Haunting Nightmare, because her + filly Twi is too darn cute.

It feels a bit like the summary of a longer story. Flesh it out.

That aside this is quite good, the mechanics are solid and the idea is cute. :3

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Yeah, it easily could be a longer story. There's a decent amount of things to play with, like diving more into the CMC playing the role of tough agents, having Twist be an actual character at the beginning of the story, and making the CMC go in through the wrong window, then have the move through the house, while avoiding attention. Considered a few things, as you can see ;)

But alas, working on a chapter for my main story, plus another CMC story (with Sea Swirl, because she's best background pony), so wanted to keep this short and simple for now. Perhaps an expanded version in the future.

Based on the Appleoosia episode, Apple Pie is the equivalent to a firearm on Equestria, so, depending on your point of view, Scootaloo just shot Diamond Tiara. :scootangel: Some would argue that this was long in coming. :rainbowlaugh:

2185966 The idea is solid, I might actually take a shot at it if you don't mind... :3

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By all means, go ahead.

I was really disappointed in that note on the end of the description. One of my favorite moments in any fan video ever is MAS's Twilight ranting about that particular trauma Celestia gave her.

"I used to have a stuff animal name Mrs. Buzzy. She was a stuffed bee. One day, Celestia came into my room while I was having a tea party, took out all of Mrs. Buzzy's stuffing and filled her with sliced bread. And THEN she yelled 'MRS. BUZZY ISN'T REAL!' AND THEN SHE TOLD ME TO WRITE A THOUSAND-PAGE ESSAY EXPLAINING WHAT THAT PROVED! AND I DIDN'T KNOOOOOOOOW! *deep breath* Hey, does anypony have any alcohol... or paint thinner?"

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Understandable. That's why I had to add the note though, just so people didn't go in expecting the RDP CMC. Though I'll admit I did contemplate using those characters instead. Scootaloo in Diamond Tiara's bedroom...

Nice short story. I could see this as a episode of the show.

Mission Impossible: Plushie Protocol! Loved it!

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