• Published 22nd Feb 2013
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Once in a Blue Moon - Riptid3



You are, Whiplash, the little known god of metal and typical mischief maker. And one fine day, You catch Celestia in a bad mood. So what does she do? Simple. She sends you to the moon.

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Goodbyes

"Have thou made thy decision?" Luna asked

"Yes Luna, I have decided to..."

You hesitate before answering. Were you sure that this was what you wanted? You closed your eyes, and took a deep breath.

"Potato." You say.

"What." Luna answered, obviously dumbfounded.

You turn your head away, not daring to face Luna out of embarrassment.

"Sorry, I'm really not one for making decisions as hard as this." You answer sheepishly.

"My question still stands." Luna said.

You take a deep breath.

"No." You say.

Luna raises an eyebrow, obviously puzzled at why you didn't take the ticket back home when you had the chance.

"Why would that be?" Luna asks.

"I know my mistakes, I haven't been on this moon for nearly long enough for it to be considered punishment. Even if I did go back, Celestia would just send me back here." You reply.

Luna nods. She turns her head back to it's original position, staring at Equestria as it slowly turned.

"You wanna know who should really go back though?" You answer.

"Thou can't possibly-" Luna said

"Yes, Luna. It's time you went home."

"But-"

"Do you really want to fight over it? You have every reason to go back. You've served your punishment long enough, and I think Celestia is starting to get a little tired of taking care of the moon."

"But after what I've done-"

"Okaythanksbye."

Before Luna could react, you lit your horn, primed for a teleportation spell.

"WAIT-" Luna says.

Too late, there was a flash of light, and she was gone. All that was left was a black circle where she once stood. You sighed and sat down. Taking Luna's place and staring at the planet. Sure, you were lonely, you had no one else, but at least you wouldn't have to lose any sleep knowing that poor Luna was still stuck on the moon.

Although the spell was rather sudden, you had a feeling that it would be good for Luna in the long run. It was about time she had some friends.

Comments ( 24 )

Unexpected ending is best ending.

Heh... for some reason this is funny to me. I just hope this isn't the end.

Farewell, Luna. Farewell...

Seriously dude, this needs a sequel.

2699800 You want a sequel?

Watch Season 1. :trollestia:

2699811 I meant one with Whiplash getting off the moon.:ajbemused:

2700009 I don't plan on writing any sequels.

2700239 *puches hole in wall* NOOOOO!!!

2700384 I just don't see how I can continue it.

2700441 How about if I let you use my alicorn OC to replace him in Manehattan and have Tia brin him back and forget to mention it?

2700680 Yeah... I don't even have an alicorn OC, to be honest.

I was really just hoping to give you incentive.

Christ, finally a happy ending for Princess Luna. You sir, we're not going to forget.

Now he can make the biggest moon castle for himself and live in it.

What if I were to tell you that Luna looks sexy in that pic. :moustache:
... Oh hai Mark. :rainbowkiss:

2707220 I would agree with you.

If you're not having a sequel then I have one question,
Will whiplash get off the moon?

2713104 Nobody knows....

The starsWhiplash shall aid in her escape...

I have decided to....
Potato

WHIPLASH YOU FUCKING GENIUS, AMAZING PLAN, 10/10

5861665 Then you have yet to realize my true potential…
MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA! :flutterrage:

Yay this is going to be very interesting to read keep up the good work update more soon please or sequel if you fill like it:twilightsmile:

Twas good but its missing a (proper) ending i mean : what happen to luna . How celestia reacted when she saw her ? Did whiplash die of boredom ?

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